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A Special Dream (poem)

Updated on June 19, 2013

A special dream that had to go

Another play another show

And as the winds begin to blow

Were yesterdays completely so

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A time to laugh for just a while

Another tear another smile

A passing chance we might beguile

This moment meant to test our style

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A time to let our feelings go

Another kiss another smile

Such fantasies we could beguile

And through it all I love you so

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But twilight greets each passing while

Another stage another show

A distant call begins to blow

A call it took all this to style

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Although it’s true it isn’t so

Another tear another blow

Eternity and time will show

A special dream that had to go

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      Angelme566 4 years ago

      Yes there is always hope , but really letting go is so painful that i myself can hardly do it..

      Such beautiful sad poem..Voted up and shared !

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      Lot Rillera 4 years ago from Philippines

      beautiful poem. sadness and letting go. if letting go can ease the pain so we must do !

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      myownlife 4 years ago from london

      Awesome poem, perfect selection of words,

      brilliantly presented,

      cheers

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      Hubert Williams 4 years ago

      Martin you never cease to amaze me. Very well done.

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      Terrye Toombs 4 years ago from Somewhere between Heaven and Hell without a road map.

      You express the forlorn and bitter sweet feeling of parting so well. Nicely done. :) Voted up and more.

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      Elena 4 years ago from London, UK

      Another beautiful poem. Cheers.

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      Jo Alexis-Hagues 4 years ago from Bedfordshire, U.K

      Yes sad, but so beautifully done, it's hard to let go of that special dream, but sometimes let go we must. Voted up and awesome.

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      Deb Hirt 4 years ago from Stillwater, OK

      This is all so true.

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      Shining Irish Eyes 4 years ago from Upstate, New York

      Very sad, intensly beautiful. Another fine creation.

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      flashmakeit 4 years ago from usa

      A great poet who can even write about sorrow beautifully.

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      Ann1Az2 4 years ago from Orange, Texas

      Beautifully written and the video was perfect. The song set the tone, even though I don't understand French. Music is the universal language. Beautiful song and a beautiful poem. Voted up.

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      Gypsy Rose Lee 4 years ago from Riga, Latvia

      Voted up and awesome. So painful when you finally have to let go of that one dream. Liked the video.

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      Movie Master 4 years ago from United Kingdom

      Beautifully said, but so sad - voting up/awesome

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      picklesandrufus 4 years ago from Virginia Beach, Va

      a really nice poem and so well written. I feel melancholy, so your perfect words did the trick!

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      Karen Silverman 4 years ago

      sigh...life - in a beautiful nutshell, Martin!

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      Jessee R 4 years ago from Gurgaon, India

      A beautifully woven dream indeed... makes me feel sad that it had to go

      Nice write

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