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A True Friend Unless (limerick)

Updated on August 5, 2013

My friends I would never betray

No matter the cash one might pay

True friendships would whirl

Through window I’d hurl

Whenever cute girl winked my way


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      Deb Hirt 4 years ago from Stillwater, OK

      I know that has happened more than once.

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      Eiddwen 4 years ago from Wales

      Spot on once again Martin and I love your work in whichever genre you choose.

      Enjoy your day my dear friend.


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      Victor W. Kwok 4 years ago from Hawaii

      A laugh out loud.

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      Vinaya Ghimire 4 years ago from Nepal

      Interesting wordplay.

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      Vinaya Ghimire 4 years ago from Nepal

      Interesting wordplay.

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      Karen Silverman 4 years ago

      LOL...women are trouble makers eh??

      yep, and proud of it! haha

      sharing M

      Hope you're wellxx

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      Faith Reaper 4 years ago from southern USA

      hehehe Yes, I can see that happening for sure!

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      Dora Weithers 4 years ago from The Caribbean

      Be careful if you're friends to more than one cute girl. How many times can you hurl?

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      Bronwen Scott-Branagan 4 years ago from Victoria, Australia

      Thank you again for a good laugh.

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      drbj and sherry 4 years ago from south Florida

      I guess that it's all for one and one for all.

      So wait 'til they leave and give her a call.

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      Romeos Quill 4 years ago from Lincolnshire, England

      Lol! Should a man put his girl above his buddies? A really good one, resounding through the corridors of truth with always a hint of tongue-in-cheek, Mhatter99.Sharing;

      Have yourself a cracking day;


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      Thomas Silvia 4 years ago from Massachusetts

      Thanks my friend for another fun read !

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      Devika Primić 4 years ago from Dubrovnik, Croatia

      Great words of freindship

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      DJ Anderson 4 years ago

      Guys are easy!! LOL

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      Bill Holland 4 years ago from Olympia, WA

      That's some serious temptation. I guess you can always make new friends, right? LOL

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      Shauna L Bowling 4 years ago from Central Florida

      Friends over cute girl? Making the right choice might just get you both!

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      wetnosedogs 4 years ago from Alabama

      Funny one.

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      travmaj 4 years ago from australia

      Way to go - some things just bring out the worst...he looks determined.

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      Jamie Lee Hamann 4 years ago from Reno NV

      Still brings a smile to my face everytime. Jamie

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      lovedoctor926 4 years ago

      the girl's expression on her face is funny. good limerick. voted up!