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A World Asunder (poem)

Updated on May 20, 2013

A heart alone to wonder

What spell had it been under

To bear the pains of blunder

And lose so much to plunder

To set a world asunder

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The season was set singing

Through lover’s hearts was ringing

To bear the pains of blunder

Was someone else’s stinging

With so much promise bringing

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A heart alone to wonder

Was she what he was after

To fill the days with laughter

And happiness hereafter

A dream in heaven’s rafter

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Those moments blossoms flowered

What spell had it been under

This feeling so empowered

Over reason it towered

And truth would be soon devoured

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Within a time then tender

Past purpose or surrender

A scar a heart would render

And lose so much to plunder

As love had turned offender

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Soon tears would be an ocean

Escape there gave no notion

Shear madness was in motion

And offered up a potion

To set a world asunder

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      Faith Reaper 4 years ago from southern USA

      Oh, me, so sad and mysterious again. I want to know what went wrong and changed everything? What truth. I know, I know, it is a poem. So intense and profound.

      Now, if the truth is death, then I am sorry dear heart.

      Voted up +++ and sharing

      God bless, Faith Reaper

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      deergha 4 years ago from ...... a place beyond now and beyond here !!!

      '....Soon tears would be an ocean

      Escape there gave no notion

      Shear madness was in motion

      And offered up a potion

      To set a world asunder'

      ...........very beautifully done as ever...loved every bit of it. sharing to the world, tweeting and votes all up.

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      LaThing 4 years ago from From a World Within, USA

      Awww, this is so touching and thought provoking, MH! Beautifully written...... Always enjoy reading your poems! Take care :)

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      Tijani Achamlal 4 years ago from Morocco

      This is beautifully sad and well-penned.

      My favorite lines are :

      Within a time then tender

      Past purpose or surrender

      A scar a heart would render

      And lose so much to plunder

      As love had turned offender

      Voted up

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      Shauna L Bowling 4 years ago from Central Florida

      It helps to know you are happily married, Martin. So many of your poems revolve around broken hearts. Sad, but always beautifully written.

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      Suzette Walker 4 years ago from Taos, NM

      Wow! Sad but beautifully written. I love the photo and the MJ song. I can feel the emotion coming out of this poem. Well done and well written!

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      I.W. McFarlane 4 years ago from Philadelphia

      There is a saying that goes like this "Give unto Caesar what's due to Caesar", and this is exactly what I will do! Mhatter, I am giving you the uttermost respect you deserve for being such a great Poet. This piece is very deep, sensational and emotional! Keep up the good work.

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      Devika Primić 4 years ago from Dubrovnik, Croatia

      The true words of a poet and so well approached with sadness

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      DJ Anderson 4 years ago

      Pain and disappointment has never been spoken as sadly

      as your words proclaim.

      You are a great talent in the world of poetry.

      DJ.

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      Ruby Jean Fuller 4 years ago from Southern Illinois

      This has got to be your very best. I love it!!!!!!!

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      kjforce 4 years ago from Florida

      Mhatter99....why do I get the feeling of underlying issues gone awry ?

      This mindset bothers me, hopefully it's just a style you are experimenting with.....very deep and thought provoking ...whoa...

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      Nithya Venkat 4 years ago from Dubai

      Great write. Voted up.

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      Eiddwen 4 years ago from Wales

      Soon tears would be an ocean

      Escape there gave no notion

      Shear madness was in motion

      And offered up a potion

      To set a world asunder

      Wonderful poem as always Martin and here's to many more by you.

      Enjoy your day.

      Eddy.

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      Bronwen Scott-Branagan 4 years ago from Victoria, Australia

      Love the way you expressed the thoughts, but the mechanics are interesting, too - it must have taken ages finding all those rhymes!

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      Deb Hirt 4 years ago from Stillwater, OK

      Sometimes, love is not what it is cracked up to be when the wrong person comes along. We all learn.

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      Gypsy Rose Lee 4 years ago from Riga, Latvia

      Voted up and awesome. Not always is the path of love smooth.

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      Mary Craig 4 years ago from New York

      Reading this makes one wonder about the pain you've suffered in relationships. So real are your beautiful poems.

      Voted up, awesome, and beautiful.

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