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Able to say Im Fine

Updated on December 17, 2014

....My life is cascading down like a waterfall...
drowning thousand deep..
my body sinks like a shipwreck...
and such fog blind my friends; none could see

A storm was hidden behind mine eyes....
...My soul wail a sharp cry every time I smile...
My every footprint, there's a struggle...
....And I'm still standing among friends; able to say 'I'm fine'

(C) Chanroth Tith 2014


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      Bubber 3 years ago

      I'm greatful you made the post. It's cleared the air for me.

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      Lisa VanVorst 3 years ago from New Jersey

      Short, sweet and so true. How often do we hide our sadness and troubles to our own friends and family. It is easy to smile when inside you feel you are dying.

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      Eric Dierker 3 years ago from Spring Valley, CA. U.S.A.

      Beautiful. This was just plain beautiful. I reckon that after reading it, I had to accept that I am just fine also. Thank you.

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      Audrey Hunt 3 years ago from Idyllwild Ca.

      And you will always be standing among friends as your beautiful poetry attracts even more people. Voted up and will share. Thanks.

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      Ghaelach 3 years ago

      Good morning to you.

      When I saw you name pop up in my mail box, it was like the sun opening it's beautiful shinning eyes on a cold winter morning. It seems so long since I have seen your name mentioned, that I had to read what you have written straight away.

      I'm not the biggest lover of poetry, but this has something in it's meaning that you are telling all you HP colleagues that you are keeping just fine.

      Take care and have a nice day.