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Achoo(haiku to what Spring brings)

Updated on April 23, 2013
Achoo and yea!.
Achoo and yea!.


Whisk and whish, goes wind,

As I huff and puff, in kind.

Flowers, all pollen, to send.


Brightly shines sun's light,

sweetly, sing the birds, at dawn,

Rising hopes, so bright.


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      Audrey Howitt 4 years ago from California

      Ahhh (choo) this is so lovely!

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      whonunuwho 4 years ago from United States

      Thanks my friend, whonu.

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      Frank Atanacio 4 years ago from Shelton

      this is great

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      Shauna L Bowling 4 years ago from Central Florida

      Along with the beauty comes the hayfever, huh? I'll bet Claritin sales skyrocket during the Spring!

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      Jamie Lee Hamann 4 years ago from Reno NV

      Brilliant haiku's, well done! Jamie

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      Tijani Achamlal 4 years ago from Morocco

      This is so sweet and adorable. Really good work, keep it up!

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      Jo Alexis-Hagues 4 years ago from Bedfordshire, U.K

      Beautiful haiku, the Spring sunshine was glorious today, unfortunately; Jack frost is on his way, well...that's life! :)

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      whonunuwho 4 years ago from United States

      Thanks bravewarrior, Frank, Jamie, OudsiaP1, and James for your kind words. Stay well. whonu

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      Michelle Liew 4 years ago from Singapore

      Yes, lovely! Brings a few A-choos, but is the most wondrous season of the year!

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      whonunuwho 4 years ago from United States

      Thanks for stopping in my friend, whonu

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      Deb Hirt 4 years ago from Stillwater, OK

      Allergies yes, but the birds and flowers still prevail. A great and truthful piece.

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      whonunuwho 4 years ago from United States

      Thank you my friend, whonu.

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      Nithya Venkat 4 years ago from Dubai

      Great work, wonderful haiku. Voted up.

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      whonunuwho 4 years ago from United States

      Thanks my friend and well received. whonu

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      RTalloni 3 years ago from the short journey

      He, he, he--Achoo Haiku! :) We enjoyed the birds bright songs today--thanks for sharing your poem!

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      whonunuwho 3 years ago from United States

      Thanks my friend, and well received. whonu

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