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Across Forrest Ridge

Updated on August 8, 2013
do you dare walk down
do you dare walk down

And thus I came upon... a planked rope bridge

stretched high.... across, Forrest Ridge

Was this my path ...my certain fate

had I been here before ..was I to late ..

To see the past...with stacks and reams...

of the life I lived ..filled with.broken dreams

And should I cross.... this lighted path

or return to an ugly... blighted wrath

back... to a certain destiny

where a life of sadness...

used to be

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      cleaner3 4 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      thank you blossom.. your comment s are appreciated

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      Bronwen Scott-Branagan 4 years ago from Victoria, Australia

      Those bridges are so important. They may lead back to memories of past hurts, or they can lead on to brighter and better things. Loved both your bridge poems and images.

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      cleaner3 4 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      thank you Faith .. have a beautiful weekend and bless you and your family ...

      made the Lord keep you safe ..

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      Faith Reaper 4 years ago from southern USA

      So true dearest Michael! I love your commenting with poetry.

      Hugs, Faith Reaper

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      cleaner3 4 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      thanks Mhatter ..

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      Martin Kloess 4 years ago from San Francisco

      That was wild. What a reflection. thank you

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      cleaner3 4 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      thank you faith ..

      if I should turn and ignore the way ..

      then my mind ..would forever say

      what you missed ..it will never be

      what you want ... you will never see

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      Faith Reaper 4 years ago from southern USA

      Aw, just turn around and start in a new direction! Very beautiful write this one. Love the imagery too, so perfect. James has made a great point up there in his lovely comment.

      Voted up +++ and sharing

      Hugs and love, Faith Repaer

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      Tijani Achamlal 4 years ago from Morocco

      Just cross and let bygones be bygones.Beautiful write here.Voted up