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Acrostic to the Human Connection

Updated on December 3, 2012
since the dawn of man
since the dawn of man
You have your flaws
You have your flaws
You rise each day to greet the sun.
You rise each day to greet the sun.
you weather the storms of life
you weather the storms of life
You re a marvel and magnificent.
You re a marvel and magnificent.
your humanity soars to the heavens
your humanity soars to the heavens

My Acrostic presentation in honor of the human condition





You are Honorable, in your intention,

You are Undeniable, without pretension.

You are Merciful, in all considerations,

You are Admirable, without reservations.

You are Neighborly, in your persuasion.




You are a human being.




You are Honest, and the true blue,

You are Universal, in what you do.

You are Magnificent, this we see,

You are Aggressive, in nature, to be.

You are Narcissistic, as only you see.




You are just human.




You are Hasty, in your retreats,

You are Upsetting, in defeats.

You are Maleviolent, to be a flaw,

You are Antagonistic, not to withdraw.

You are Negative, and sometimes raw.




You are vulnerable.




You are Happy, in your demeanor,

You are Unpredictable, a misdemeanor.

You are, Marvelous, if you desire,

You are Argumentative, to conspire.

You are, Natural, and what we admire.




You are a Creation, of the one God






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you receive your nurture from the sun
you receive your nurture from the sun

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      Bill Holland 4 years ago from Olympia, WA

      That about says it all. We are a complicated species, are we not?

      Very nice work, whonu!

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      whonunuwho 4 years ago from United States

      Thanks Bill, Yes we are a mystery wrapped in an enigma, and quite a varied species, after all. Thanks again, whonu.

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      LupitaRonquillo 4 years ago

      I liked the format of your poem, it was very unique... great poem too!

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      whonunuwho 4 years ago from United States

      Thank you Lupita, your kind words are appreciated. whonu

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      Martin Kloess 4 years ago from San Francisco

      Bravo my friend. I bow to your excellent demonstration of an acrostic poem.

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      whonunuwho 4 years ago from United States

      Thanks Mhatter, and always glad when you stop by for a chat, whonu

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      Eiddwen 4 years ago from Wales

      A brilliant Acrostic and here's to so many more. Have a wonderful day.

      Eddy.

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      whonunuwho 4 years ago from United States

      Thank you Eddy, I enjoyed the challenge and the season of the year has it influences, too.whonu

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      Bronwen Scott-Branagan 4 years ago from Victoria, Australia

      That must have taken a while to write! Very interesting application of the traditional acrostic and I liked what you wrote about, too.

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      whonunuwho 4 years ago from United States

      Thanks Blossom, I did enjoy assembling this and it was enjoyable. Thanks for stopping by. whonu

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      Mary Craig 4 years ago from New York

      Not only a masterful acrostic but a beautiful poem! "Unpredictable" we are certainly that! Well done my friend.

      Voted up, awesome, and beautiful.

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      whonunuwho 4 years ago from United States

      Thanks for our kind words, whonu.

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      Gary R. Smith 4 years ago from the Head to the Heart

      whonu, you answered a Question about hubbers' own favorite poems, "Mine, I wrote on Hub Pages this past year, entitled "When"....

      I could not find "When" but enjoyed "Acrostic to the Human Connection."

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      whonunuwho 4 years ago from United States

      I shall look for it and place it for you to see. Thanks my friend, and for sharing and reading. whonu.

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