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Addicted To Ruins

Updated on April 14, 2012

Somewhere in my heart

You still make the beats go high

And I must tell you

You come as tears in my eyes...


I know I'm living on ruins

I am without you

Some kinda pain has struck my heart

In need of you

I know I wiil love you

Even after I die

I got addicted to you love

for my fucking life


Those memories cause pain

I wish I was slain

I want'em plucked out of my mind

want'em struck out of ma soul

But I still know I will love you

Even if I am slain

I got addicted to you

Your my fuckin pain

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      Anan Celeste 5 years ago from California

      Interesting.The palpable anger is everywhere.

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      Jessee R 5 years ago from Gurgaon, India

      sometimes... anger is worth!

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      saday 5 years ago from India

      Super like rahul...... Voted up

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      Jessee R 5 years ago from Gurgaon, India

      thanks saday!

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      randasrendition 5 years ago from Southeastern Minnesota

      awesome. poetry heals the soul.

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      Jessee R 5 years ago from Gurgaon, India

      thanks for stopping by randa! :)

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      Audrey Howitt 5 years ago from California

      The anger in the piece is palpable--

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      Jessee R 5 years ago from Gurgaon, India

      thanks Audrey for your kind comment !

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      Deborah Brooks Langford 5 years ago from Brownsville,TX

      are you mad? I am so sorry. I can feel it in all your words... I love how you took us with you with your words. that's a true poet.

      blessings

      Debbie

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      Jessee R 5 years ago from Gurgaon, India

      Thanks for the kind comments Debbie! I believe true sanity for a poet lies in becoming insane with his writings cause insanity somewhere lies deep in the soul :)

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      tesslyn suzanne 5 years ago from kerala, India

      good poem.....i totally understand the pain and the wrath it hold......great expression....good work...:)

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      Jessee R 5 years ago from Gurgaon, India

      Thanks Suzan for connecting to the poem! glad you liked it!

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      Ruchira 5 years ago from United States

      addiction can be tormenting...lol

      good description though :)

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      Jessee R 5 years ago from Gurgaon, India

      Addiction always torments! Sooner or later it does!

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      Scott Biddulph 5 years ago from Gainesville Georgia

      I liked it. The anger was something I could relate with. I have written many poems to get ride of the pain of a lost loved one. WP

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      Jessee R 5 years ago from Gurgaon, India

      Thanks WP! Glad you liked it!

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      pearlmacb 5 years ago from Switzerland

      Hi Rahul0324, good poem, I like the strong words. Negative emotions produce the best dramatic poetry, keep writing...brings healing to the soul:) Look forward to viewing more of your hubs. Blessings

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      Caroline Marie 5 years ago from Close to Heaven

      Wow! Awesome poem. I love everything about it. Great pictures too!

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      Jessee R 5 years ago from Gurgaon, India

      Thanks Pearl! Glad you liked my words and left such a kind comment!

      Rahul

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      Jessee R 5 years ago from Gurgaon, India

      Caroline! Good to see you :) Thanks for the time... much appreciated!

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      Brian Lawson 5 years ago from Windsor, Va.

      This poem is kick-ass! The title itself is very inventive and the emotion is as sharp as a knife! Well-penned! Voted up and awesome.

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      Jessee R 5 years ago from Gurgaon, India

      Thanks poet! for the superb comment of yours and glad you liked it!

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      Poetic Fool 5 years ago

      I must agree with poet83, the title is great and it's what drew me in. Yes, the anger and hurt is palpable in this piece but it's also transparent and honest. These are very real feelings that are expressed powerfully. I've found that writing, poetry in particular, provides a great release. A catharsis for such emotions as this that if left inside can only fester and grow worse. This was well written and impactful. Voted up and awesome too!

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      Jessee R 5 years ago from Gurgaon, India

      You are so right poetic! I find poetry and writing the best ways to vent out my stress, emotions and feelings... You of all must know how releasing and refreshing poetry can be

      Thank you so much for your kindness!

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      Roohi Khan 5 years ago from India

      I know that feeling and that anger too. Right there with you, Rahul! I hope writing the poem made you feel better. I know reading it made me feel better.

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      Jessee R 5 years ago from Gurgaon, India

      I am glad it made you feel better..... TO be honest.... before writing this I was deranged... broken... and listening to Atif Aslam's Aadat... it inspired me...

      Thank you for stopping by:)

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      Mike Pugh 5 years ago from New York City

      What a ride this poem is, its raw and uncut poetry embarking on the hurtfulness of attachment to some sort of dependence, at least that's my take on it all. Nice!

      Your linguistics here definitely doesn't hold back neither. Interesting delivery and climax of an ending.

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      Jessee R 4 years ago from Gurgaon, India

      Hi Mike! I tried to keep it Raw! You saw it! I am glad you looked into it so deep!

      Thanks for connecting bro!!

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      Moipone 4 years ago from South Africa

      wow strong words and deep. i like very much because what you see is what you get.

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      Jessee R 4 years ago from Gurgaon, India

      Hi moiponetsoka! I am glad you liked my work :)

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      BeyondMax 4 years ago from Sydney, Australia

      Powerful message out there, like it a lot. Seriously awesome! Bullet through the heart, love is such a b..witch.

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      Jessee R 4 years ago from Gurgaon, India

      Glad you like it Max! Love sometimes can surely be a b**ch :D

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      PurvisBobbi44 4 years ago from Florida

      rahul0324,

      Love can be infuriated, but moments of overwhelming passion can be well worth one’s anger later.

      Love this to the cord emotional poem.

      Your Hub Friend,

      Bobbi Purvis

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