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Adjourn not my love!

Updated on September 29, 2015

Girth my heart awhile my love

for it profusely bleeds of continuous rejection

love falling into contemplative pieces

to be carefully gathered to the original whole

with a lot grout of affection

contouring the infinite convulsions

that continually reflect my love

for you

grooving a vastness of limitless space

to accommodate you

and only you

and your adorable heart

the sojourn that I plead for now

I know

shall extend to be my everlasting abode!

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    • sujaya venkatesh profile image
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      sujaya venkatesh 22 months ago

      true Man Av

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      Deb Hirt 22 months ago from Stillwater, OK

      Love is not perfect, and does it ever take a toll on one's emotional state. Well done!

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      manatita44 22 months ago from london

      Yes, make it your everlasting abode. The yearning of the One for the One. God speed!!

    • sujaya venkatesh profile image
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      sujaya venkatesh 22 months ago

      tnq Cat Gyp

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      sujaya venkatesh 22 months ago

      true Marl

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      Marlene Bertrand 22 months ago from Northern California, USA

      I see such longing in this beautiful love poem.

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      Catherine Giordano 22 months ago from Orlando Florida

      Ah love--so wonderful and so cruel.

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      Gypsy Rose Lee 22 months ago from Riga, Latvia

      Nicely penned.

    • sujaya venkatesh profile image
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      sujaya venkatesh 22 months ago

      tnq 74

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      Hari Prasad S 22 months ago from Bangalore

      buzz of bee,

      that is me,

      is only for thee.

      can't you see?

      Nice poem sir.

      - Hari

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      sujaya venkatesh 22 months ago

      tnq for your motivating words Do Dan

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      Dora Isaac Weithers 22 months ago from The Caribbean

      Oh no! The bleeding heart is not good. A dilemma but described beautifully.

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      Dana Tate 22 months ago from LOS ANGELES

      grooving a vastness of limitless space

      to accommodate you

      and only you

      and your adorable heart

      This is my favorite verse. Beautiful work .