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Adoing on my love!

Updated on October 3, 2015

To overblow the beauty of my love

my intention is not;

an overall survey of the fair sex

led me

to this overbold eulogy of her indigenous fairness;

consign I

this conspicuous consensus to my fellow cravers,

a challenge though!

Among the common breed of every creation

stands out in each

an irresistible classy type

mine I a quality to reckon with

and

I its proud bearer!

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    • Frank Atanacio profile image

      Frank Atanacio 22 months ago from Shelton

      very strong, and emotional, I love it :)

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      John Hansen 22 months ago from Queensland Australia

      I agree with Frank, thumbs up Sujaya

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      sujaya venkatesh 22 months ago

      tnq Frnk Jo

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      manatita44 22 months ago from london

      An awesome poem. Exquisite and powerful, Sujaya.

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      sujaya venkatesh 22 months ago

      tnq Man

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      Gypsy Rose Lee 22 months ago from Riga, Latvia

      A most emotional write.

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      sujaya venkatesh 22 months ago

      tnq Gyp

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