ArtsAutosBooksBusinessEducationEntertainmentFamilyFashionFoodGamesGenderHealthHolidaysHomeHubPagesPersonal FinancePetsPoliticsReligionSportsTechnologyTravel

All That I Need...

Updated on July 15, 2012

All That I Need Is you

Come get to know me

Little by little

Every day

A little more each day

Feel me, a part of you

As I come into you

And we dissolute in each other

Every day

We'll discover each other

A little more each day

Keep at it, exploring

Cause

Once you get to know me

I promise, you won't need to know any else.


Share with me all you have

And take all of mine

Little by little

More and more

Every day, all the time.

Feel me inside, a part of you

Think what I think

Then when we stumble and say the same thing

At the same time

Again...

We'll look at each other and smile,

Cause

If I could have you

There ain't nothing else I need.

Comments

    0 of 8192 characters used
    Post Comment

    • christin53 profile image

      Ann-Christin 4 years ago from UK

      A lovely poem you describe a blossoming relationship beautifully.

    • Deep Metaphysical profile image
      Author

      Deep Biswas 4 years ago from India

      @christin53 Thank you Christin. Thought I'd write one poem about a beginning not ending! :)

    • LaThing profile image

      LaThing 4 years ago from From a World Within, USA

      Simply beautiful! Such a gentle nudge toward love :)

    • Deep Metaphysical profile image
      Author

      Deep Biswas 4 years ago from India

      @LaThing Thank you LaThing. It reveals a softer more feminine side of mine. :p

    • BeyondMax profile image

      BeyondMax 4 years ago from Sydney, Australia

      Oh my God. What a tender loving piece... Breathtaking. Sensual and even erotic (ok, I may sound weird but that's 'cause I am a bit of a twisted minded thing so I am kind of feeling trembling inside in a good way). Very beautiful!

    • rkane3 profile image

      Richard Kane 4 years ago from Oakland CA

      Very nice, thank you.

    • Ryem profile image

      Ryem 4 years ago from Maryland

      You touch on the beauty of getting to know someone and fall in love perfectly. This is really good. Glad I read it!

    • shiningirisheyes profile image

      Shining Irish Eyes 4 years ago from Upstate, New York

      You captured pure and true promise of love beautifully.

      Wonderful and I'm voting up.

    • BJC profile image

      BJC 4 years ago from Florida

      Very beautiful and soothing!

    • DFiduccia profile image

      DFiduccia 4 years ago from Las Vegas

      Very sensual!

    • Deep Metaphysical profile image
      Author

      Deep Biswas 4 years ago from India

      I don't think you're twisted minded(unless you consider that a compliment :P) , you're a very different interpreter. Thank you for the comment BeyondMax.

    • Deep Metaphysical profile image
      Author

      Deep Biswas 4 years ago from India

      The gladness is all mine Ryem. Thank you.

    • Deep Metaphysical profile image
      Author

      Deep Biswas 4 years ago from India

      I can always count on your support, thank you so much Shining.

    • Deep Metaphysical profile image
      Author

      Deep Biswas 4 years ago from India

      Glad you liked it BJC. I consider it a great success that you found it soothing. :)

    • Deep Metaphysical profile image
      Author

      Deep Biswas 4 years ago from India

      Just some reminiscences of my love life. Thank you for taking time to read my stuff D. :)

    • Vivian-tmt-hnp profile image

      Vivian-tmt-hnp 4 years ago from USA.

      7:21pm Sunday July 15, 2012

      Dear Deep Metaphysical,

      So unique and warmly is your love.

      Vivian

    • Mhatter99 profile image

      Martin Kloess 4 years ago from San Francisco

      A path to promise... your words. congratulations

    • Deep Metaphysical profile image
      Author

      Deep Biswas 4 years ago from India

      Thanks Vivian.

    • Deep Metaphysical profile image
      Author

      Deep Biswas 4 years ago from India

      Hi Mhatter, thanks for stopping by. Congratulations for what though?

    • Deep Metaphysical profile image
      Author

      Deep Biswas 4 years ago from India

      @rkane3 You're welcome rkane.

    • cleaner3 profile image

      cleaner3 4 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      sweet. sweet. an invitation to love? nice.

    • Deep Metaphysical profile image
      Author

      Deep Biswas 4 years ago from India

      @cleaner3 Thanks man. Yes it is an invitation, you comin right? :P

    • cleaner3 profile image

      cleaner3 4 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      wouldn't miss it for the world. i'll bring the extra party favors.!!!

    • poojasd7 profile image

      poojasd7 4 years ago from India

      cute poem. brings out the joy within the reader's heart.

    • Deep Metaphysical profile image
      Author

      Deep Biswas 4 years ago from India

      @poojasd7 Thanks Pooja. :)

    • PHILLYDREAMER profile image

      Jose Velasquez 4 years ago from Lodi, New Jersey

      A very powerful declaration of love. I like how you worded the idea of being so inside each others head that you start saying the same things. It's so true that that happens.

    • always exploring profile image

      Ruby Jean Fuller 4 years ago from Southern Illinois

      Beautiful expression of love...

    • tobusiness profile image

      Jo Alexis-Hagues 4 years ago from Bedfordshire, U.K

      For a minute there I thought I was on cleaner3 page :)

      This is beautiful, such promises of delight so very sensuous

      Loved it

    • tjdavis profile image

      Teresa Davis 4 years ago from Moscow, Texas

      Very lovely..:-)

    • Deep Metaphysical profile image
      Author

      Deep Biswas 4 years ago from India

      Thank you Philly. Yes often happens, we tend to think so much alike that we start saying the exact same things in a given situation.

    • Deep Metaphysical profile image
      Author

      Deep Biswas 4 years ago from India

      Thank you Ruby. Glad you liked it.

    • Deep Metaphysical profile image
      Author

      Deep Biswas 4 years ago from India

      I don't know, cleaner3 maybe my alter ego :P. Thank you stopping by and reading my poem Jo.

    • Deep Metaphysical profile image
      Author

      Deep Biswas 4 years ago from India

      Thanks TJ.

    • CrazedNovelist profile image

      A.E. Williams 4 years ago from Hampton, GA

      Very romantic, Meta. I love the emotion in this one. It's so sincere and genuine. Great work! :)

    • Deep Metaphysical profile image
      Author

      Deep Biswas 4 years ago from India

      Thanks Crazed. :)

    • the gentleman profile image

      the gentleman 4 years ago from Saint Louis Missouri

      a simple romantic poem, yet it displays complexity of the desires of a beginning relationship

    • Mykhaylovych profile image

      Mykhaylovych 4 years ago from London

      Little by little and I dissolutely created a fantasy! I simply enjoyed the deliciousness of your seductive masterpiece :))) So so ME! Beautiful!

    • Gypsy Rose Lee profile image

      Gypsy Rose Lee 4 years ago from Riga, Latvia

      Aw this is so sweet and romantic. Voted up and awesome.

    • Deep Metaphysical profile image
      Author

      Deep Biswas 4 years ago from India

      Thank you. Glad it pleasured you. :)

    • Deep Metaphysical profile image
      Author

      Deep Biswas 4 years ago from India

      Thanks Gypsy Rose. :)

    • kj force profile image

      kjforce 4 years ago from Florida

      Deep Metaphysical....ahhh soulmates...couldn't be a better love...

      nicely written..you're obviously a romantic fool ? I mean that in a good way ! beautiful poem....

    • Deep Metaphysical profile image
      Author

      Deep Biswas 4 years ago from India

      Was a romantic fool....never again! Thank you for the compliments kj. Thank you for stopping by.

    • rcrumple profile image

      Rich 4 years ago from Kentucky

      The fire burns and the body churns! Strong descriptiveness and emotion sharing. Being married for over three decades, I had almost forgotten a special time in life (almost). Great Poem!

    • Deep Metaphysical profile image
      Author

      Deep Biswas 4 years ago from India

      Thank you.

    • bethperry profile image

      Beth Perry 4 years ago from Tennesee

      What a lovely poem! Glad you shared it.

    • Deep Metaphysical profile image
      Author

      Deep Biswas 4 years ago from India

      @beth glad you read it. :)

    • shruti sheshadri profile image

      shruti sheshadri 4 years ago from Bangalore, India

      Beautiful yet again! I have become a great fan of your style of writing! :)

    • btrbell profile image

      Randi Benlulu 4 years ago from Mesa, AZ

      Really, really nice!~ Thank you!

    • profile image

      dreamseeker2 4 years ago

      Beautiful sentiment, in wanting just that right person to share ones moments with, for a lifetime.

    Click to Rate This Article