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Almost a Love Story ~haiku~

Updated on August 11, 2016

A haiku about an almost perfect love story.


Blending the colors
Shadows of red and white
True love's kiss and smiles


So it was then called
Perfect love at its finest
Tuned to its accord.

 

Heartbeats in heaven
Scent of roses and moon paints
For a white wedding


Now fate changed its mind
From truth to deceitful smiles
And scarred someone's life

 

Tears cowardly formed
Staining the lovely white dress
With fragments of heart


A beautiful lie
Crushed everything on its sight
Love's unending cry


Empty sky floating
Creating a scentless song
Memories remain


There are some hurts that you never completely get over. And you think that time will diminish their presence and to a degree it does, but it still hurts because well, hurt hurts.

- "The Story of Us"


© 2012 Mycee. All Rights Reserved.

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      Sammiree 4 years ago

      (((HUGS)))

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      Tammy 4 years ago from North Carolina

      This is a powerful poem! Love the line "loves unenending cry". Very touching and moving.

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      Michelle Liew 4 years ago from Singapore

      A passionate, heartfelt Haiku.

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      Bill Holland 4 years ago from Olympia, WA

      Myz, this is you at your best. Beautiful poetry!

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      Shauna L Bowling 4 years ago from Central Florida

      Beautiful, Spy! I miss your poetry! Thank you for giving me my 'fix'!

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      Madeleine Salin 4 years ago from Finland

      Beautiful! I can feel how much the hurt hurts.

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      Susan Zutautas 4 years ago from Ontario, Canada

      How sad and yet so beautiful.

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      Mary Craig 4 years ago from New York

      Lovely, well done haiku! "Heartbeats in heaven" was the line that caught me...I hope this sadness is not for you right now. Best to you!

      Voted up and beautiful.

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      Mark G Weller 4 years ago from Lake Charles, LA.

      A beautiful blend of Haiku and poetry Myz. Thank you for sharing these very real feelings!

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      cleaner3 4 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      emotional , expressive,..... beautiful poetry.

      well done ..

      Michael

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      Randi Benlulu 4 years ago from Mesa, AZ

      These are: beautiful, perfect, awesome

      Thank you!

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      Thomas Silvia 4 years ago from Massachusetts

      Very beautifully written and touching !

      Vote up and more !!! SHARING !

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      Audrey Howitt 4 years ago from California

      Beautiful, especially the last one--

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      travmaj 4 years ago from australia

      It certainly resonates with me - those hurts that rarely heal and when we think they have - they come back to haunt us. Very well written -very heart felt. Thanks

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      Deb Hirt 4 years ago from Stillwater, OK

      VERY well done, Mycee. One can feel the pain and hear the song as it is sung...

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      Abigayle Malchow 4 years ago from Ripon Wisconsin

      Very beautiful

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      Jo Alexis-Hagues 4 years ago from Bedfordshire, U.K

      Unknown, beautifully done.

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      Paula 4 years ago from Beautiful Upstate New York

      One word...breathtaking.........UP++++

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      Martin Kloess 4 years ago from San Francisco

      Remarkable job. Thank you

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      Mary Hyatt 4 years ago from Florida

      Yes, as others have said: this is a beautiful piece of work.

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      Gypsy Rose Lee 4 years ago from Riga, Latvia

      Voted up and beautiful. Just lovely. Passing this on.

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      Dianna Mendez 4 years ago

      A touching poem. The pain is evident but leaves you with truth.

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      IAmForbidden 4 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up.

      @Sammi, Tammy, Michelle, Bill, Sha, Made, Susan, Mary C, Mark, Michael, Btrbell, Tom, Audrey, Travmaj, Deb, Abby, Jo, Paula, mhatter, Mary, Gypsy, Dianna,

      i just want to say thank you for these beautiful messages.

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      Sueswan 4 years ago

      Hi Myz,

      "A beautiful lie

      Crushed everything on its sight

      Love's unending cry"

      To be hurt by someone that you love and thought that loved you is the kind of hurt you never totally get over.

      Take care

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      Linda Bilyeu 4 years ago from Orlando, FL

      Hi M, You are awesome! :)

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      Debby Bruck 4 years ago

      Sad ending.

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      Rajan Singh Jolly 4 years ago from From Mumbai, presently in Jalandhar,INDIA.

      A very touching poem and beautiful!

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      IAmForbidden 4 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up.

      Sue, Shine, Debby, Rajan.. thank you for your sweet message!

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      Senoritaa 4 years ago

      Absolutely gorgeous. Hard to pick yet I think this one's my favorite:

      Tears cowardly formed

      Staining the lovely white dress

      With fragment of hearts

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      IAmForbidden 4 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up.

      wow..i also love the line. thank you so much!

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      Capedium 4 years ago from Texas.

      Catchy title..

      It was worth every seconds if my time..

      Voted up beautiful..

      Really interesting

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      rdsparrowriter 4 years ago

      Heart touching and beautiful poem :) Well done!

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      IAmForbidden 4 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up.

      Wow, Cape! that was amazing. thank you much

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      IAmForbidden 4 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up.

      thanks as always RD!

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      Deborah Neyens 4 years ago from Iowa

      Sad but beautiful. Well done.

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      IAmForbidden 4 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up.

      thank you so much Deborah.

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      Eiddwen 4 years ago from Wales

      So sad but also tender and with beauty.

      A broken heart described with the mind of a true artist. Here's to so many more to follow my friend.

      Lots of love

      Eddy.

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      IAmForbidden 4 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up.

      Thank you Eddy!! for such lovely comment. Hugs.

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      Rosemary Amrhein 4 years ago from Boston, MA

      Sad poem, of a very sad and broken heart. I hope it has healed some since you wrote it!

      Rose

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      Audrey Howitt 4 years ago from California

      Such a sad piece--beautiful though!

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      Live To Write 4 years ago from Phoenix, Az.

      Empty sky floating

      creating a scentless song

      Memories remain

      Wow breathtaking...

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      Tammy 4 years ago from North Carolina

      This is beautifully ironic when you say "fate changed its mind." This is the type of poetry that stays with a person. Very powerful with a tinge of dispair. Painfully beautiful!

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      Deborah Brooks Langford 4 years ago from Brownsville,TX

      Perfect love in a poem in a life time what a concept.. this poem makes me believe and or conceive that it can be

      Debbie

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      Nithya Venkat 4 years ago from Dubai

      Beautifully written sad with emotions running rife. Great poem, voted up and shared.

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      IAmForbidden 4 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up.

      @Rose, audrey, Laurinzo, Tammy, Deborah, Vellur.

      Thank you so much my friends for those wonderful comments.

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      Kudrat-E-Khuda Barat 4 years ago from Bangladesh

      Its really 'Almost". Thanks and looking for more!

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      IAmForbidden 4 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up.

      Thanxxx :)

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      Miyakah 4 years ago from A Journey on Finding My Own Destiny

      forbidden love...like me.

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      IAmForbidden 4 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up.

      Thank you! i guess so to.

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      Peggy Woods 4 years ago from Houston, Texas

      What an expressive poem filled with love and heartbreak. Beautifully written and composed. So sad if this is resonating from your heart. If so...let the healing begin and never look back. He was not worth your faith, love and trust in him.

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      IAmForbidden 4 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up.

      Hello Peggy. thank you for reading and for the lovely message.

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      Susan Haze 4 years ago from Sunny Florida

      Beautiful and sad. I loved it. I couldn't pick a favorite. They're all awesome.

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      IAmForbidden 4 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up.

      Thank you so much KoffeeKlatch Gals..

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      deergha 2 years ago from ...... a place beyond now and beyond here !!!

      Amazing work really.

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