ArtsAutosBooksBusinessEducationEntertainmentFamilyFashionFoodGamesGenderHealthHolidaysHomeHubPagesPersonal FinancePetsPoliticsReligionSportsTechnologyTravel
  • »
  • Books, Literature, and Writing

Alone?

Updated on November 26, 2015

you stand

away from the herd

and think

does the herd stand away

from you?


alone

in the fields of uncertainty

you shy away

being unreal

in your own reality


Comments

    0 of 8192 characters used
    Post Comment

    • Russ Baleson profile image
      Author

      Russ Baleson 8 years ago from Sandhurst, United Kingdom

      Thank you!

    • Jewels profile image

      Jewels 8 years ago from Australia

      That resonated. Very real.

    • Lgali profile image

      Lgali 8 years ago

      good writing

    • Russ Baleson profile image
      Author

      Russ Baleson 8 years ago from Sandhurst, United Kingdom

      Thanks guys, it's comments like these from people like you that inspire me to keep on writing. Thanks for your support.

      Russ

    • Proud Mom profile image

      Proud Mom 8 years ago from USA

      The first stanza represents so many things to me!! I LOVE this poem!

      Great job, Russ!

    • maven101 profile image

      maven101 8 years ago from Northern Arizona

      Hi Russ... Nicely written...concise and heartfelt.

      Reminds me of Kant's empirical realism...there's a duality here...Larry

    • tonymac04 profile image

      Tony McGregor 8 years ago from South Africa

      Ah Russ - you stand out from the herd, that's for sure!

      Thanks for sharing

      Love and peace

      Tony

    • Russ Baleson profile image
      Author

      Russ Baleson 8 years ago from Sandhurst, United Kingdom

      Thank you, much appreciated xx

    • profile image

      jjrubio 8 years ago

      Beautiful!