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Am I boring?

Updated on November 2, 2013

 What a silly question!

How could I be?

One minute I'm swearing

and talking about being free

Next minute I'm praying

and down on bended knee

Hmmm

Life is precious

Life is painful

Am I boring?

Do I stare at you and silently sway

Or do I talk endlessly

about how my best friend is gay?

Do I seem

Like a bible preacher, teacher?

Hmm

Why?

Are we

so

different

Why

am I

so twisted?!

I think I may just be

Someone you would see

Someone you'd like to kiss

Someone you'd like to undress

Like a petal

Like a rose

Many layers for you

to unfold

Oh be bold!

I have yet more to tell you

More to show

If you want to know

So, come to me

See me for who I am

I'm everything I should be

Just be my man

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      schoolgirlforreal 5 years ago from USA

      Hi htodd,

      Thank you very much:) I'm glad you liked it!

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      htodd 5 years ago from United States

      The poem is really cool

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      schoolgirlforreal 6 years ago from USA

      michael ely,

      thanks:)

      @ladyjojo,

      hey!

      I"m doing well, talk to you soon ;)

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      ladyjojo 6 years ago

      LOL

      Nice poetry maam!!

      How are you? hope all is well

      God bless your tweet heart ;)

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      michael ely 6 years ago from Scotland

      Hi schoolgirlforreal, A great poem. I really liked this.

      Michael.

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      schoolgirlforreal 6 years ago from USA

      Lots of smiles today, you made my day:)thankyou!;)

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      Druid Dude 6 years ago from West Coast

      Excellent expression. Found this almost...titillating. Nice. Deep.

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      schoolgirlforreal 6 years ago from USA

      @Stan

      Thanks a bunch mate lol :)

      @Jellybird

      Hey! Glad you liked this, my comment about music these day? which one? thankyou

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      Jellybird 6 years ago

      Not boring. Quite straight-forward.

      ps. Iliked your comment about music these days, oh and the pic's posted. REgards

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      Stan Fletcher 6 years ago from Nashville, TN

      Boring? Heck no! Not if you can write this....

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      schoolgirlforreal 6 years ago from USA

      hey cceerpp, lol did I get your name right? Lol what does it stand for? :)

      Yes, I think we should be ourselves. Being spiritual is important but we all have much more to share .

      Glad you enjoyed! :) I enjoyed writing it;) :) :D

      Hey onrea, yes it (is) abstract :) LOL! I could see, after I wrote, how it could be perceived as not, LOL!

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      cceerpp 6 years ago from Ghana

      It seems beautiful to me so again voted BEAUTIFUL

      especially this part:

      Oh be bold!

      I have yet more to tell you

      More to show

      If you want to know

      So, come to me

      See me for who I am

      I'm everything I should be

      Just be my man :)

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      schoolgirlforreal 6 years ago from USA

      thank you onrea. It's lovely to meet you. Glad you joined hubpages!

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      onrea 6 years ago from Rochester, NY

      Nice abstract (at least I thought so) expression.

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      schoolgirlforreal 6 years ago from USA

      Awesome comment, thanks saddlerider xo !

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      saddlerider1 6 years ago

      Expression is a virtue and you certainly don't appear to be boring:0) I truly believe you could keep a conversation at a gathering of kindred spirits, a joy to be around, to undress with words and share the petals as they fall.

      How sweet this poem is, it left a scent of a real woman behind for a real man to follow:0)) and enjoy. Hugs from the saddlerider.

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      schoolgirlforreal 6 years ago from USA

      Hi Dave,

      Thankyou, How is everything? Can you really? Somewhere in time? I've seen that movie and I don't recall any of this in that movie!!! Anwyway....wow. Then again, now that you mention it, I do remember it better now, and I suppose maybe. You know that's a nice compliment...Anyways, yes that was a terrific movie and VERY (very) romantic btw!!!

      Thankyou again, Dave. I don't know alot of boring people...ehh, actually I DO!!! Thank God we're all unique and special thou :)

      Rose

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      schoolgirlforreal 6 years ago from USA

      Hey kashmir! Thanks. Wow :) thankyou :) Yes, I (would) prefer to be entertaining! LOL

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      Dave Mathews 6 years ago from NORTH YORK,ONTARIO,CANADA

      Nice poem. Parts of it I can recall from somewhere in time. You could never be boring.

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      Thomas Silvia 6 years ago from Massachusetts

      Hi Rose, thanks for sharing this super poem, i can tell by the pictures in this hub that you are not boring . I would think more entertaining ! :-)

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      schoolgirlforreal 6 years ago from USA

      Thankyou!

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      Jaymeyaroch 6 years ago from Somewhere between today and yesterday.

      I loved it! Go you!

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      schoolgirlforreal 6 years ago from USA

      You mean not take it literally, I got that it was a fantasy not necessarily a reality.

      But this is my work, my mind, and it comes naturally, it's all me. Without any thought it flowed from pen to paper.

      Thankyou for you comment.

      ~you can read more like this @ Blondey

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      Cagsil 6 years ago from USA or America

      Kimberly can be a great inspiration for a lot of people, as long as people read her writing with an open mind. ;) I know the hub you speak of, because I remember reading it before when she had a different account. :)

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      schoolgirlforreal 6 years ago from USA

      Thankyou Ray

      This was inspired by Kimberly's http://hubpages.com/hub/A-Womans-Passion-Exoposed

      I liked it alot. =)

      I thought I would express myself...a bit more

      @>-->--

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      Cagsil 6 years ago from USA or America

      Hey Rose, interesting poem. I'm not sure exactly what you were going for, but you expressed yourself quite well. LOL! :)