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Amazing Disgrace

Updated on August 11, 2017


Her crying for attention


Is like music to the deaf



Pausing ever so slightly


Who would hear her best?



Her problems are so minor


No focus to better her life



She wears her crown of vanity


Expecting all the attention for the night



Sorry I was late to your pity party


But I purposely made sure that I was tardy


I don’t believe in living life that way



More shallow than a rain puddle


Yet she would try to say she’s drowning



No chance for a positive influence


She would rather continue frowning



Black and white make gray


But to her that’s the color of her sun



She’d rather focus on the negative details


Then to find the positive and run



Sorry I was late to your pity party


But I purposely made sure that I was tardy


I don’t believe in living life that way



She wants all the money


She wants all the fame


She wants it all to herself


She wants you to know her name



She wants you to think her problems are bigger and more important than yours


If life was a game for the pity, she would be holding the highest score



Amazing disgrace


How lost and profound


The path you have chosen


Is the path buried into the ground



Amazing disgrace


So blind to see


Your grip you thought was strong


Has loosened quickly around me





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    • Fullerman5000 profile imageAUTHOR

      Ryan Fuller 

      6 years ago from Louisiana, USA

      Thanks so much James. Always great to see you visit man. Hope all is well.

    • James A Watkins profile image

      James A Watkins 

      6 years ago from Chicago

      I love these lines:

      "More shallow than a rain puddle

      Yet she would try to say she’s drowning"

      Brilliant! I think this is your best poem yet. It is very good. Well done!

    • Fullerman5000 profile imageAUTHOR

      Ryan Fuller 

      6 years ago from Louisiana, USA

      Thanks Packer.

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      Alastar Packer 

      6 years ago from North Carolina

      Written like a sage Fullerman. In agreement 100%.

    • Fullerman5000 profile imageAUTHOR

      Ryan Fuller 

      6 years ago from Louisiana, USA

      thank neil. nice to see words of the truth. thanks for reading man

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      Neil Sperling 

      6 years ago from Port Dover Ontario Canada

      LOL --- Pity Party Planners - not petty party - I stand corrected. :-)

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      Neil Sperling 

      6 years ago from Port Dover Ontario Canada

      Well done. Petty Party planners are everywhere... lost souls who have not woke up yet. We've all met them - key is to not be one.... and if you are one - wake up!

      Thanks

    • Fullerman5000 profile imageAUTHOR

      Ryan Fuller 

      6 years ago from Louisiana, USA

      This is all so very true Laura. Thanks for the words of reality and thanks for liking my poem. I blame t.v. as well.

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      Laura Matkin 

      6 years ago from Laceys Spring, Alabama

      Awesome poem! Really good work there and right to the heart of sad condition some people live with. I can only hope they grow out of it! It's so much better to be happy and joyful! I agree that much of this is due to T.V. I also blame the narcissistic and sarcastic characters people idolize on T.V. My biggest angst are the people who are sarcastic because they believe it's the way "smart" people talk. I wish Hollywood would be entertaining and not influencing our morals and attitudes.

    • Fullerman5000 profile imageAUTHOR

      Ryan Fuller 

      6 years ago from Louisiana, USA

      Thanks so much Dzy. Society really has painted a vain picture of whats important. thanks for the votes.

      Katrine, well said. I agree with you all the way. It is the trials in life that teach us exactly what is important. thanks for stopping by.

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      KatrineDalMonte 

      6 years ago

      We are what life has made us. The more we see, experience and go through the wiser and stronger we become in a process. We gain a 'protective shield' around us, able to endure life's kicks easier. And more likely we are to recngnize big, important things in life, having less eye for what's small, petty and unimportant. Unfortunatelly many people flow through their life unable to understand that life doesn't only move around them.

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      Liz Elias 

      6 years ago from Oakley, CA

      That pretty much describes modern society. All of the shows on TV along the lines of "Hollywood Access," and so forth--not news, but gossip. Who cares? None of it is important. It is shallower than a rain puddle, indeed!

      Well said. Voted up and shared.

    • Fullerman5000 profile imageAUTHOR

      Ryan Fuller 

      6 years ago from Louisiana, USA

      thank you so much nity i am glad you enjoyed it. Thanks for the vote also.

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      nityanandagaurang 

      6 years ago

      I like every word of poem specially these words-She want your all attention,she wants you to think that her problems are big.I long to hear more poem like this from you.Beautiful and voting it up Fullerman5000.

    • Fullerman5000 profile imageAUTHOR

      Ryan Fuller 

      6 years ago from Louisiana, USA

      Sunshine always a pleasure to see you. I agree with you 100%

      Rebecca that is a great expression. I might have to use that

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      Mark G Weller 

      6 years ago from Lake Charles, LA.

      I love your 1-800 CRY BABY expression rebeccamealey!

    • rebeccamealey profile image

      Rebecca Mealey 

      6 years ago from Northeastern Georgia, USA

      Good Job! My favorite expression for this type....Call 1 800 CRY BABY!

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      Linda Bilyeu 

      6 years ago from Orlando, FL

      Do people seriously have time for pity parties anymore? They are truly a waste of time that could be spent doing something that's unselfish and contribute to society. I liked your poem...I tend to brush past those people. UP! AWESOME!

    • Fullerman5000 profile imageAUTHOR

      Ryan Fuller 

      6 years ago from Louisiana, USA

      Hostess of the pity party. I like that. Thank you for the kind words.

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      Paula 

      6 years ago from Beautiful Upstate New York

      Fullerman5000....Bravo Bravo!!! This is so excellent and an issue close to my heart. How I dread the whining, moaning and groaning of the perpetual Hostess of the Pity Party....and have a known a few? Far too many. I've had to try my best to dance around them just because they carry toxins that can ruin a perfectly wonderful day! Don't you think that after awhile, it would occur to them that HAPPY people are happy because they MAKE IT THAT WAY!!! Thank you for this great poem!

    • Fullerman5000 profile imageAUTHOR

      Ryan Fuller 

      6 years ago from Louisiana, USA

      I think we can all relate on some level that we have had an expierence with a person of the similar nature. Thanks for the positive vibes Curiad.

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      Mark G Weller 

      6 years ago from Lake Charles, LA.

      Wow, do I know someone that you wrote this about. It is always someone else's fault, and in many cases these are the people collecting welfare or some form of assistance and then refuse to work. The think the world owes them a living. Thank you for the great Hub.

      Voted up!

    • Fullerman5000 profile imageAUTHOR

      Ryan Fuller 

      6 years ago from Louisiana, USA

      Couldnt agree with you more cebutouristspot. I think its ashame the shallowness of people. thanks for reading.

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      cebutouristspot 

      6 years ago from Cebu

      I agree with you. A lot of people simply pity themselves to much that they forget to move to make themselves better and blame other people success when they fail. It dont make sense but I am a witness to this type of people.

    • Fullerman5000 profile imageAUTHOR

      Ryan Fuller 

      6 years ago from Louisiana, USA

      Thanks Victoria and good to see you. I blame lame reality television for a lot of these problems. I know some people like this and they don't even have a clue on what real problems are. Thanks for the hub love.

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      Victoria Lynn 

      6 years ago from Arkansas, USA

      I like this! And I know people like this, unfortunately. Drama queens and kings who think their problems are so huge, and they certainly can't be there for their friends. Well done. Voted up and several other things. sharing!

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