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An Epitaph – the poem

Updated on November 9, 2012
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One way to play some heart,

Other way to clay some cart.


Then a lost trail to fill a gap,

Created by own end a trap.


Some frill for a host of chip,

Can darkness cover the crib?


A fake day end into the dusk,

A cerise sky calls for thy crux.


Do not you hear me waiting?

Do not you care my shouting?


Yet another night unfold,

For so many agonies untold.


An empty bed so far so damp,

Tears rolling down the camp.



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My trembling hands look for you,

In my last dream you smile anew.


Now, another knock in the door,

I open to a fog of memory moor.


World is unaware of the symphony,

That kills all my left behind harmony.


But days roll on without a hitch,

Can you feel I will be able to ditch?


I flow a fake life to another night,

If only life would have felt the plight.


Then a full stop to cherish so far so good,

A void song sung the epitaph for the mood.

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      Mary Craig 4 years ago from New York

      Beautiful. "Do you hear me waiting"...to me, those words capture the essence of this poem. Loving, lost, and waiting....pain and sorrow so beautifully depicted.

      Voted up and awesome.

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      Jo Alexis-Hagues 4 years ago from Bedfordshire, U.K

      These Winter nights plays hell with our moods, the pain and longings are achingly palpable, beautifully done.

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      Karen Silverman 4 years ago

      sigh...loving without being loved back is one of life's greatest agonies!

      Your words drew me in - i felt the desperation and need...

      beautifully woven!

      very impressive..

      sharing with the hub-munity..

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      deergha 4 years ago from ...... a place beyond now and beyond here !!!

      dear tillsontitan....its nice to have you after a gap......thanks for you stopped by and comment, votes and everything. Your view is always much appreciated.

      deergha

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      Thank you @tobusiness for you dropped by and left a comment here. Its always very inspiring for me.

      deergha

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      Dear friend ImKarn,

      Your comment is always much looked for and it is very precious for me to have your visit. It feels great the way you got related with the work. You are always welcome indeed

      God bless you

      deergha

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      Martin Kloess 4 years ago from San Francisco

      Wild! we took different approaches on a similar subject. But congratulations on a well composed and very emotion packed poem. Thank you

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      deergha 4 years ago from ...... a place beyond now and beyond here !!!

      Many thanks for dropping by and for your view here. You are always welcome indeed @ Mhatter

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      flashmakeit 4 years ago from usa

      Recapitulating on memories that well never return can be a hard thing to do and that is what this poem expressed to me.

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      deergha 4 years ago from ...... a place beyond now and beyond here !!!

      Many thanks for stopping by and leaving a comment here. It sure precious for me @ flashmakeit.

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      Gypsy Rose Lee 4 years ago from Riga, Latvia

      Beautiful and sentimental. Nice poetry.

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      Jackie Lynnley 4 years ago from The Beautiful South

      Very beautiful sadness. Words of a real poet.

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      Shining Irish Eyes 4 years ago from Upstate, New York

      Creatively unique stunning descriptions in your masterpiece. You leave me pondering on my many nights when I to, longed for and dreamed of heart breaking subject matters.

      I am a huge fan of your creative mind.

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      Bronwen Scott-Branagan 4 years ago from Victoria, Australia

      A lovely poem.

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      deergha 4 years ago from ...... a place beyond now and beyond here !!!

      Thank you dear Gypsy for your continual support dear friend. God bless you... always!

      deergha

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      Dear Jackie,

      Thanks for dropping by and your precious view here. I am honored truly. God bless you

      deergha

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      Dear shiningirisheyes,

      I don have words to explain my appreciation. I am honored really to have you in my life. I will try to keep up to your expectation in coming days I hope. Many thanks again

      God bless you

      deergha

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      Thank you @ BlossomSB,

      For stopping by and leaving a comment here.

      God bless you always

      deergha

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