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An Illustrious Night!

Updated on October 14, 2014
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  • The bright-glaring moon,

The white-sizzling stars

And the silver-lining clouds

Against the dark back-drop -

Are suggestive of

The contrasts in life!



  • The day's sweat toiled,

It's time to shed tears -

It’s the moment

to soften!


  • A day's work over –

with

Some negligence

Some errors

Some mistakes -

Some intentional

Some unintentional -

like some interrupted sleep!

A reality check!

Real Dreams Dream Real!

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      Lamont1 2 years ago

      I like the style!

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      sujaya venkatesh 2 years ago

      tnx Lam

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      muhammad abdullah javed 2 years ago

      Hi Sujaya..Thanks for sharing an interesting poem. Impressed with your thoughts. How realistically the views have been expressed when the days work got over. Lets hope that the tomorrow does not witness our negligence and errors.

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      sujaya venkatesh 2 years ago

      tnx abdu

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      Mary Craig 2 years ago from New York

      "like some interrupted sleep", makes you stop and think. This whole poem makes you stop and think.

      Voted up and interesting.

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      sujaya venkatesh 2 years ago

      tnx til

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      Gypsy Rose Lee 2 years ago from Riga, Latvia

      I like that expression - dream real.

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      sujaya venkatesh 2 years ago

      tnx Gyp

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      Sandra Joy Eastman 2 years ago from Robbinsdale MN

      Very insightful . Thank you for sharing

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      Dianna Mendez 2 years ago

      Hard work makes sleep so sweet. Love your poetry on this thought.

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      sujaya venkatesh 2 years ago

      tnx tea san

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