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An Ordinary Summer Evening

Updated on October 20, 2010

An Ordinary Summer Evening

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Weather is not What You See Outside-It is What You Feel Inside

On a temperate summer evening

am walking lonely under the vast horizon.

Hither and thither patches of clouds,

creating shapes like dwarfs and elves.

Soothing, gentle breeze flowing

breeze so soft as a new-born baby

kissing bare feet, wrist and palm.

Crows are taking homewards flight: a warm retreat,

the day must have be an auspicious one.

Clouds are now evenly spread-

not a trace of single break-

covered with azure tints and shades.

Tip-toe, tip-toe rain drizzles

a merry rain: rain that brings loss to none

Oh rain! Oh breeze!

Do touch my soul

Do touch my heart

The weather there is cold and numb

Winter there is not yet gone

Make the weather inside warm


Weather is not what you see outside

It is what you feel inside

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      thevoice 7 years ago from carthage ill

      smart beautufil reading hub thanks much

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      gulnazahmad 7 years ago from Pakistan

      thank you so much for your kind comments on my hub

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      Rose West 7 years ago from Michigan

      I liked this! Especially the part with the tip-toe-ing rain :)

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      gulnazahmad 7 years ago from Pakistan

      thankyou so much rose

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      Freya Cesare 7 years ago from Borneo Island, Indonesia

      Beautiful poem. I enjoy reading it. Weather can be inside and outside, but weather inside will feel more real when it become too intense. I hope the weather in your heart is good now. ^_^

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      gulnazahmad 7 years ago from Pakistan

      Thanks Freya for reading my hub.

      yeah the weather is good now:D

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      irum 6 years ago

      yes its all inside us which matters.......... beautiful

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      gulnazahmad 6 years ago from Pakistan

      Thanks irum

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      aware 6 years ago from West Palm Beach Florida.

      nice

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      gulnazahmad 6 years ago from Pakistan

      Thanks aware for your comment.

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      ExoticHippieQueen 5 years ago

      Hey gul, nice poem! It's true, regardless of what the weather is outside, we have our own weather going on inside, right? Voted up and awesome!

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      gulnazahmad 5 years ago from Pakistan

      This picture which I have shared here inspired me to write this poem.

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      Sweets21 5 years ago

      Very touching I love this poem.

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      gulnazahmad 5 years ago from Pakistan

      Thanks sweets, its really touching I wrote it when I lost my mother and I think its really very touching for me.

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      Sweets21 5 years ago

      Your welcome! And I'm very sorry to here that, I prey that your heart heals from such a loss.

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      gulnazahmad 5 years ago from Pakistan

      Sweets there is nothing as regretful as going through loss of one of your parents. Thanks for the comment as well as for the prayer.

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      Sweets21 5 years ago

      You are more then welcome.

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