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An enthralled love!

Updated on August 29, 2015

Enamoured I was

of a lady

so pretty

so lovely

so beautiful

so fair

so enticing

so to say

lost I my balance in life

toppling over love

injured by spurns

with bruises within a feeble heart

managed I

to hurl words of adoration

despite my knocked out state

such is the power of her infinite charm

collecting myself cool

thought I

the plight of my fellowmen

who chance to see her

not unusual for craving hearts

to soup in affairs though

aching with unbearable bleed

looked forward I

for another entrapping jolt!


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      Deb Hirt 20 months ago from Stillwater, OK

      Very nice, and it certainly shows your depth for a profound love.

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      sujaya venkatesh 20 months ago

      so encouraging Avi

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      Eric Dierker 20 months ago from Spring Valley, CA. U.S.A.

      Well done and revealing of true love. Somewhere lost and somewhere found in that mystery.

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      sujaya venkatesh 20 months ago

      tnq Eric

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      Ralph Schwartz 19 months ago from Idaho Falls, Idaho

      I felt as light as the air while reading this almost melodious jaunt through the wonderful world of love - very engaging work

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      sujaya venkatesh 19 months ago

      tnx much RJ

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