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And she sits there...

Updated on August 16, 2012
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And she sits there

Staring into space

With nowhere to go

Nowhere to look

No one to know

Who would want to know

Who’d wanna care

And she sits there

Silent and alone, every night

But deep down

She doesn’t even care

She knows this was her fate

To leave this world alone

To leave this world of hate

To back down from all

To give up on it all

To leave this world behind

And it’s happening, tonight.

And when the sun goes up

And the night is long gone

Everyone will be wondering

What happened to that girl?

I remember, she was lonely

So lonely, she just sat there

She didn’t talk to anyone

You could see it in her eyes

Now where has she gone?

Should we have talked to her?

Helped her out a little?

Told her that it’ll be okay?

Would it have done anything?

Now we’ll never know

But if only she knew

That all wasn’t lost

But now it’s too late

The girl is long gone, forever.

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      IntegrityYes 

      6 years ago

      You are very welcome. Keep writing really great ones.

    • EuroNinila profile imageAUTHOR

      Fotinoula Gypsyy 

      6 years ago from NYC BABY

      dghbr, glad you enjoyed it and thank you for the share:)!

      thanks for reading ashish!

      Cloudexplorer, thank you and I agree. This is why some people don't find true love, because in order to have true love you must have love for yourself first! Thanks for the insightful comment and for reading!

    • EuroNinila profile imageAUTHOR

      Fotinoula Gypsyy 

      6 years ago from NYC BABY

      thanks for reading IntegrityYes!

      yes, your right and I like any reaction, thank you very much CriticialMessage

      snoblet, thanks! :)

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      Mike Pugh 

      6 years ago from New York City

      Such a sad poem, but a reality for some folks today, the answer is not in wanting others to shower a person with love, its in showering others selflessly without regard to expecting it to come back in return.

      This is what I feel, and if that person just sits there expecting to receive some sort of attention well then I guess they quit on themselves having potential to love the world.

      It's a shame though, but it is something that does occur in life. Lets hope more people wise up to learn more about self love, as opposed to worrying about other loving them so much. The maybe they can extend such a love outwards, and no one will be left behind with such a cypher.

      Anyhow great poem, it was well written and well thought out, voted up!

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      Ashish Joshi 

      6 years ago from India

      A touching piece of work...that speaks of sadness.

      Good work...keep it up.

      up and beautiful.

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      deergha 

      6 years ago from ...... a place beyond now and beyond here !!!

      Very beautiful style of expression

      deep and moving....really enjoyed this one.

      Voted up and sharing:-)

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      Dave Rogers 

      6 years ago from New York

      So sad, But very moving... i like :) thumbs up

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      Murphy 

      6 years ago from Chicagoland, Illinois

      *frowns* - it is a good piece when it causes a reaction. Any Reaction! *frowns*.... voted up & awesome.

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      IntegrityYes 

      6 years ago

      It certainly is emotional.

    • EuroNinila profile imageAUTHOR

      Fotinoula Gypsyy 

      6 years ago from NYC BABY

      Yea I painted an emotional picture in my head and just wrote this after, lol. Thanks ChristyWrites for reading!

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      Christy Birmingham 

      6 years ago from British Columbia, Canada

      So much emotion in this poem!

    • EuroNinila profile imageAUTHOR

      Fotinoula Gypsyy 

      6 years ago from NYC BABY

      hehehe thanksss Michael :)

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      cleaner3 

      6 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      The girl is here and now and she is you!!!! love your style.

      Michael

    • EuroNinila profile imageAUTHOR

      Fotinoula Gypsyy 

      6 years ago from NYC BABY

      Thank you tobusiness! :)

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      Jo Alexis-Hagues 

      6 years ago from Lincolnshire, U.K

      I'm so glad you posted this, it is thought provoking and beautifully done. I think we've all had those moments of 'what if I'd said something or did something' maybe it wouldn't have changed anything, but we would have tried. Voted up

    • EuroNinila profile imageAUTHOR

      Fotinoula Gypsyy 

      6 years ago from NYC BABY

      Thanks everyone!! :) I'm happy you guys enjoyed it because I was a little hesitant to post it, lol.

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      Princess Prisca 

      6 years ago from Heaven living on Earth

      EuroNinila,

      Deep, beautiful and sad; all in the same note.

      Great job from a talented poet.

      Blessings!

      Ciao...Princess Prisca

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      Melanie Chisnall 

      6 years ago from Cape Town, South Africa

      Beautiful words, really enjoyed this poem. Voted up and beautiful!

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      Bill Holland 

      6 years ago from Olympia, WA

      An all-too familiar tale from my years as a teacher. Well done; you captured quite a bit of emotion with few words; the sign of talent.

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