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Angellic Girl - Poetry

Updated on February 20, 2010

Beautiful girl, pale and white

dangerous curves on a heavenly body.

Eyes of brown warmth like a fire

set my soul alight with a sense of passion.

Her laugh lights up a sparkling personality.

She's quiet like death creeping up

and yet lights up the room

with a shy smile.

My feelings for her run deep

like veins in my body.

I know it's wrong, I should

not feel this but the frail

state of her soul captures

mine of a peaceful nature and

strong passion. Like a wave of lust,

she is a strong desire.

My beautiful angellic being,

you shall never know just how

deep my affections are for you.

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      pocketaus 7 years ago from Australia

      A beautiful outlook. I look forward to reading more.

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      Micky Dee 7 years ago

      Very nice poetry. Thank you! I'm so old- I don't know if I have the time to become a vampire. 4 years huh? I'm 60 now. I'm not sure I'll live long enough to finish the indoctrination. Thanks!

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      stars439 7 years ago from Louisiana, The Magnolia and Pelican State.

      Excellent poetry. Very Nice. God Bless You.

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      CiscoPixie 7 years ago from I'm in a world of my own, but aren't we all?

      thank you Lita! it's always good to have a inspiring comment.

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      Lita C. Malicdem 7 years ago from Philippines

      You're a born poet for coming up with this nice poem. Very vivid passion. I hope it materializes with your love focus. Good luck my friend.

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      aware 7 years ago from West Palm Beach Florida.

      nice.

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      CiscoPixie 7 years ago from I'm in a world of my own, but aren't we all?

      thank you faybe! you should write..

      Haha thanks blaise

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      Fehl Dungo 7 years ago from close to you...

      sometimes wrongs are more beautiful when they feel right..

      blaise loves Pixie's poems! :)

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      Faye Constantino 7 years ago from Florida

      Nice imagery and passion. Beautiful and inspiring. Now I want to write a poem too. But I have just to enjoy more of yours for now. :)

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      CiscoPixie 7 years ago from I'm in a world of my own, but aren't we all?

      Haha thank you sophs! But i prefer to be the nonsense poet ;)

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      sophs 7 years ago

      This is absolutley beautiful! I loved it! You certainly are a poet CP :) keep up the great work

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      CiscoPixie 7 years ago from I'm in a world of my own, but aren't we all?

      thank you tatoo! She was much younger than me and when she found out that this was about her, being a teenager, freaked out because she was straight and wanted nothing to do with me. But in the end, it's an experience to take with one in life.

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      TattoGuy 7 years ago

      Loved this my lil friend, I hope she did as well !

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      CiscoPixie 7 years ago from I'm in a world of my own, but aren't we all?

      thank you ladyjane. I am no poet but i practice my hand at it whenever inspiration strikes!

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      ladyjane1 7 years ago from Texas

      Lovely poem really liked it. I have been practicing poetry myself of late. I have always wanted to be a poet, maybe not a great one but a poet indeed. Nice