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Another File

Updated on March 10, 2017


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http://frankatanacio.hubpages.com/hub/Same-Game

A seasoned detective who had run the course,

thirty-five years on the police force,

and he really didn’t know what to say,

another homosexual murder,

a man killed for being gay,

stacks of reports in one pile,

and the detective was shuffling through

another file,

then removing a five-by-seven

color photo of a half nude

blood soaked wreck,

very raw and crude,

hog tied from feet to neck,

on the apartment floor,

it was a homicide that shook

him to the core,

there was a red blindfold on his face,

earring ripped out of his ear,

murderer gone without a single trace,

as the gay community would fear,

another file, another cold case.

© 2011 Frank Atanacio

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    • Vinaya Ghimire profile image

      Vinaya Ghimire 5 years ago from Nepal

      My dear detective poet, your writing is very powerful, images you evoke hang before my eyes.

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      Frank Atanacio 3 years ago from Shelton

      hey thanks Vin for checking out my files..:)

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      Marites Mabugat-Simbajon 3 years ago from Toronto, Ontario

      ...another cold case...another strong drama injected into my veins. A wonderful and capturing poem, Frank!

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      Frank Atanacio 3 years ago from Shelton

      thank you coffee :)

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      LaThing 3 years ago from From a World Within, USA

      How do you do it, Frank? Poetry out of such horrid images..... Only a true poet can do that! Great work, buddy.... Voting up and everything :)

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      Marlin 55 3 years ago from USA

      Great job with the imagery, Frank. You paint some very frightening images.

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      Frank Atanacio 3 years ago from Shelton

      I know right? LOL just kidding thank you so much LaThing!!!

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      Frank Atanacio 3 years ago from Shelton

      Hey Marlin55 longtime hope ur writing is coming along swell..thanks for popping by my file..

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      Marlin 55 3 years ago from USA

      It's always a pleasure to see you Frank!

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      Frank Atanacio 3 years ago from Shelton

      keep on writing my friend :)

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      Fullerman5000 3 years ago from Louisiana, USA

      Deep and edgy, I really enjoyed the way this flows. Great work. I cannot wait to read some more of your works. Keep churning these great poems out.

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      Frank Atanacio 3 years ago from Shelton

      thanks Fullerman5000 I drop by your page and return the favor bless you bro :)

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      Wiqar Ali Shah 3 years ago from Peshawar Pakistan

      i agree with Fullerman5000

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      Frank Atanacio 3 years ago from Shelton

      thanks wigaralishah :)

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      Cynthia B Turner 3 years ago from Georgia

      Raw imagery is absolutely your forte. Your poetry is skillfully and beautifully executed, but painful and haunting to read. That's the definition of poetry, I suppose. It lingers and evokes strong emotions. You are so talented.

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      John Hansen 3 years ago from Queensland Australia

      Wow Frank, crime poetry as well as your short stories. Well done, excellent imagery in so few words. Voted up.

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      Frank Atanacio 2 years ago from Shelton

      thanks Cyndi and Jodah for visiting my file ")

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      Chris Mills 2 years ago from St. Louis, MO until the end of June, 2017

      Very fresh, creative approach, Frank. So.....what's missing here? Oh, another file please. Second verse solving the first. Thanks for sharing.

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      Frank Atanacio 2 years ago from Shelton

      thanks Cam :)

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      Mary Craig 2 years ago from New York

      Amazingly chilling but not amazingly sad. Your poetry truly evokes the sadness and brutalness we live with in this world. Sometimes when I read your poetry I feel like I'm watching a train wreck, its so sad but I can't take my eyes away (that's a compliment btw).

      Voted up, useful, awesome, and interesting.

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      Frank Atanacio 8 months ago from Shelton

      Thanks Till for reading my 3 year old poetry... still fresh though, right? LOL

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      Shyron E Shenko 8 months ago from Texas

      Wow Frank, very graphic and well written, well done, great poem.

      BTW are you in law enforcement?

      Blessings my poet friend

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      Frank Atanacio 8 months ago from Shelton

      thanks so much shyron for checking out this old piece..:)

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