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Ghost story: A real short ghost story

Updated on May 24, 2011

Do you know What is Ouija Board?

This is a video I found on the internet for little girls playing with "Ouija Board"

Kids think ghosts are a game

Some parents are not aware of what their kids are doing,  kids try very dangerous things that might harm them to the end of their lives. This Ouija board is very dangerous it might work wrong and they could face real demonic possession. Some times it causes horrible things after playing. I didn't want to show you the horrible things here, I've just grapped the nicest video about this experience.

A real experience to tell that they exist and you can feel their presence

I spent 4 weeks with my husband in the second floor in his father's house. He had to travel since he was working in another town. It was winter when I was alone upstairs in my father in Law's house and started hearing some low beats at around 11:00 p.m. First I didn't care but when sounds came back and continued for a few minutes longer, it became an issue to me. One night, the beats became nearer and louder and I felt something coming closer and sucking the air around me . I kept frozen in my place with no single move or sound till that ended up. I stayed awake till next morning and I can't tell you how long was this night. Next day, before I go to work, I passed by my father in law, and told him of what happened that night. He denied that there were any strange sounds or moves the night before. Again that night I heard louder beats, then sounds disappeared for months.

After 8 months, my husband came back, I told him bout the sounds and he mentioned that they used to hear very loud digging 5 years ago. It sounded as if someone was trying to dig a hole in the floor upstairs "where me and him were living at that time". But he told me that the sounds have stopped and they've forgotten them.

 

Few months later, when some men were digging in the street "I don't remember why", they found a skeleton of human. Some people said that it looked as he was killed and buried here, other people said this is the guard man of the primary school who disappeared 30 years ago.

I sneaked to the primary school next morning after my husband has left to work. I asked the guard man there if he has any idea of what has happened to the guard man who disappeared. He took me to an old man, he said that he was there when this accident happened. The old man told me not to try to discover. He stirred at me for a while and he whispers "If my partner has listened to me, he wouldn't has gone".

If you need to read more ghost stories, try this scary story.

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      princess Anamika 3 years ago

      Itz scary......

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      sofia 4 years ago

      really scary! it made me really believe in ghosts

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      akashdeep 4 years ago

      horrorful one and had shivered me.

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      Avinash Sunil Darnal. 4 years ago

      Its a nice scary story,but please cheak the spelling other vice it is a cool story

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      Albert Kivak 5 years ago from Cemetary

      There's a difference between ghost and demonic possessions.

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      Joseph A K Turner 5 years ago from West Yorkshire

      Loved the story, do check the spelling though-mine is shocking most the time. stared is the word you are looking for. stirred means to move a spoon or other implement around in (a liquid or other substance) in order to mix it thoroughly. If you are unsure about the spelling of a word, google it, I do that a lot lol. From a fellow ghost writer :). great stuff, keep it up.

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      priscilla molina 6 years ago

      some of my friends dnt belive

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      Scarface1300 6 years ago

      I love Spooky stories and this one was really good Thanks

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      Jaspal Singh 6 years ago from India / Australia

      Very fine way to write. I feel scared. Wonderful.

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      kafsoa 6 years ago

      :) Cute ginjill ashberry :)

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      ginjill ashberry 6 years ago

      Nope. I've grown up :)).

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      kafsoa 6 years ago

      Hey ginjill ashberry, if you're still really playing Ouija board I think it's time to think more about it. Ghosts are not very nice to play with :)

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      Ashley TKL 6 years ago

      Hey there, Kafsoa..

      I play the game as a kid and shamefully as a young adult too. We use coins and self written paper as the OUIJA board. I agree with you about the presence and stuff. I might write about it in one of my future hubs.

      Will drop by again!

      GjillAberry

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      kafsoa 6 years ago

      Thanks Kosmo!

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      Kelley 6 years ago from California

      Well, the power of the imagination is truly amazing. Thanks for the chills. Later!

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      kafsoa 6 years ago

      Yes it is. I can never forget the horrible long cold nights. Thanks Azik for stopping by and reading and writing a comment :)

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      AzikSparx 6 years ago from Denpasar, Bali, Indonesia

      That scary and would be unforgettable experience...

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      amahubber 6 years ago from Egypt

      This is scary ;)

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      kafsoa 6 years ago

      Yes I believe, I experienced this for more than 10 minutes. It was really scary, It sounds like sucking air around me. OMG that was creepy!

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      Bill Russo 6 years ago from Cape Cod

      I too have some strange Ouija board memories...in fact everyone I know who has tried it, has been unsettled by the experience. One strange experience I had with a ghost or something, was 40 years ago. I was sitting in my chair reading the newspaper when I heard loud breathing right in front of me. There was NOBODY THERE! But the breathing (coming from nowhere) continued for almost a minute before it stopped. I never heard it again.

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      kafsoa 6 years ago

      Yes Dexis, good that they threw it away, it's a serious disaster. I was working in one of the golf countries and some girls were playing this board after school and they got frightened and ran away to their homes, afire started from that point and destroied the whole school.

      I know Ruda, and I believe that they exist. Many real horrible storries happened to me and to people I know, and I really believe that this ouija board should be forbidden. It led to serious problems

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      Rudra 6 years ago

      I tried this when at university. A group of us sat down and then called the ghost. The room went cold and the light turned off. The whole place started shaking. We all ran out of the room. And this is a true story. I tried it and will never try it again. Till this day I am afraid of ghosts. Trust me ghosts do exist and can be called though this method... I do believe your story.

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      Dexi 6 years ago from New England

      My girls had a very strange experience with the Ouija board that they threw it out. yikes!

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      kafsoa 6 years ago

      Things like this happen to many people everywhere;)

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      oelshazli 6 years ago

      is it real? It seems like something happened to me..

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      kafsoa 6 years ago

      I hear you Tart

      Thanks for being the first to read it :)

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      ExplodingPopTart 6 years ago from Richmond, VA

      Creepy! I tend to lean more to the scientific side of life, but I have a few stories of my own that deal with things I can't explain.