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Another Brave Seaman Meets His Fate (limerick)

Updated on July 20, 2013

My course I swore never to fail

Through snow wind and hail I’d prevail

No seas could unfurl

My quest for my pearl

Till wink of cute girl caught my sail


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      Cat 4 years ago from New York

      Men, so easily distracted! ha ha! I swear, ADD was first discovered in men, but it actually stands for Attention Deficit Disorder... oh wait, that is what it means... Okay, I'm sleep deprived, what can I say... there's something in these limericks :D

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      Jennifer 4 years ago from Lost...In Video Games

      Two ships in passing? LOL! I liked this a lot! I voted it up!

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      epigramman 4 years ago

      when me saw her in that car - I had sea man.

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      wetnosedogs 4 years ago from Alabama

      Thanks for the morning laugh.

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      Vincent Moore 4 years ago

      The wink will do it all the time, it's brought many a seamen to his knees and dry docked for some time recovering from the aftermath of that wink. Nicely done my friend.

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      wildove5 4 years ago from Cumberland, R.I.

      My father was a Navy man,

      my mother winked at him!

      If it wasn't for the flutter of lash,

      I'd never have gotten the chance to meet them.

      Lol, very sweet limerick! Voted up!

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      Kathryn 4 years ago from Manchester, Connecticut

      I love it! The man starts out focused and determined, and is sidetracked by a cute girl. Lol.

      ~ Kathryn

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      drbj and sherry 4 years ago from south Florida

      Her meaning was clear and her wink you bought,

      She was more beauteous than the pearl you sought.

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      Bill Holland 4 years ago from Olympia, WA

      Many a sailor has been blown off course by a beautiful woman. :)

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      rose-the planner 4 years ago from Toronto, Ontario-Canada

      I suppose men can't resist the allure of a beautiful woman. This was another entertaining piece. Thank you for sharing. (Voted Up) -Rose

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      Thomas Silvia 4 years ago from Massachusetts

      Very well done my friend, thanks for this fun read !

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      Dora Isaac Weithers 4 years ago from The Caribbean

      Never underestimate the power of a wink eh? Cute!

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      Ruby Jean Fuller 4 years ago from Southern Illinois

      You devil man, A wink caused Mark Anthony demise..Hee...

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      Deb Hirt 4 years ago from Stillwater, OK

      Funny how you can even find them on the roiling waves.

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      Victor W. Kwok 4 years ago from Hawaii

      So true that a wink from a pretty girl can stop anyone.

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      Dianna Mendez 3 years ago

      Oh how that one wink can change a man's heart! Very clever.

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