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Are We In Love? - A Poem

Updated on December 12, 2013

Hello, reader.


Digging inside my file, I found this poem. About unrequited love I had been wrote at one period of my life. Even at the saddest moment, emotion still beautiful when write down into poem, isn't it?


Thank you for reading.

Freya Cesare

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When I said I love you

I really meant it

Not by the stone of your muscles

Nor by the dimple of your cheeks

But by the way you stand up over us

Over your passion about The Almighty

And your loyal support to me

It was then I started noticing on how

Your voice sound to my sensitive ears

Like a song

Or sweet hums of the river bank

Or how your eyes changed its color

Flickered

Following your emotions

Which now look at me with disbelieve

When I asked the most stupid question in the world

“Are we in love?”

Of course we were not!

You was the figment of my imagination

And I

Just a girl

With hole in her heart

When I said I love you,

I really meant it

But little was I know

You hardly real

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    Joyce Haragsim 5 years ago from Southern Nevada

    This poem is truly amazing and so beautiful. Voted up and awesome, Joyce.

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    Gypsy Rose Lee 5 years ago from Riga, Latvia

    This is lovely, sad and emotional. Love can hurt so bad at times especially when it's not two sided.

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    Martin Kloess 5 years ago from San Francisco

    Aah... love... thank you for this song from your heart

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    Freya Cesare 5 years ago from Borneo Island, Indonesia

    Writer20: Thank you. ^_^

    Gypsy Rose Lee: Yes, it is. The problem is sometimes it only happened in our mind. hehehe. Thank you, dear.

    Mhatter99: With pleasure, Sir. Thank you for reading this.

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    sofs 4 years ago

    Freya, this is simply eloquent. Innocence and pain, illusion and reality.... Great write. Voting this all the way up.

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    greeneryday 4 years ago from Some tropical country

    Beautifully written love poem, you cannot beat anything whispered from your heart... thank you..

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    ahorseback 4 years ago

    Freya ! My long and lost Daughter ......I hope your life is perfect and busy and loving and never need us old timers anymore ! lol........Miss you and hearing of your life !

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    Deborah Brooks Langford 4 years ago from Brownsville,TX

    I found this beautiful poem and it brought back so many memories good and bad.. what I am trying to say is it touched me..

    great job.

    sharing

    Debbie

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    Jim Higgins 4 years ago from Eugene, Oregon

    Very beautiful poem. We are glad you found it. Welcome back!

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    shruti sheshadri 4 years ago from Bangalore, India

    hey, a great one.. i like the emotions and the profound thoughts behind this! glad to read indeed :)

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    Tijani Achamlal 4 years ago from Morocco

    Beautiful and outpouring with emotions.Thanks for sharing.I hope you are doing fine now.Good work.I voted up.

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    Poetic Fool 4 years ago

    Beautiful Freya! Are we in love? It's such a scary, risky question to ask. So much rests on the answer with hopes affirmed or dashed against the rocks. This was such a vulnerable, transparent, lovely piece of writing. Thanks for sharing it.

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    samikan 4 years ago from online

    great job......beutiful

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    Tijani Achamlal 4 years ago from Morocco

    Good work.This poem is so beautiful.I know how it feels when somebody rejects your love.It is so sad and painful when love is only from one side .I voted up

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    stars439 3 years ago from Louisiana, The Magnolia and Pelican State.

    Great poem from the heart. GBY .

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    Nell Rose 3 years ago from England

    Beautiful poem Freya, being in love is a scary thing, whether the person feels the same or not, loved this! voted up and shared, hope your back to stay!

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    Freya Cesare 3 years ago from Borneo Island, Indonesia

    Hello, Everyone. Thank you for your kindness and supporting words to me. I'd been away too long and found very annoying facts on almost all of my hubs: it's written in capital!!! -_-' Aaaargh!!!

    Sofs, Greneryday, ahorseback, deborah brooks, xstatic, shruti sheshadri, james-wolve, poetic fool, samikan, stars439 and Nell rose; thank you very much. I'll visit you as soon as I able to.

    Unfortunately, I still not able to be around much though. Still, I wish you all the best.

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    Nell Rose 3 years ago from England

    Take care, and see you soon, nell

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    Freya Cesare 3 years ago from Borneo Island, Indonesia

    Thank you, Nell. Big hug for you. ^^

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    Mackenzie Sage Wright 3 years ago

    Very beautiful poem. It seems to speak right from the soul. Thanks for sharing, voted up!

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    Guyene Jackson 3 years ago from USA

    every body take care....

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    manatita44 3 years ago from london

    A wonderful form of expression in poetry. Continue with your current gifted skills.

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