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As I Walk By....

Updated on July 23, 2012


Your beautiful face......

lights up like the sky

I can see that you notice... .

.As I walk by


Your happiness shines.....

It can tell no lies

My feet move slower..

Now it seems, I glide


The gleam, the sparkle...

.they meet, our eyes.

We connect like two wires...

electricity flies


The heat ,the moment....

people notice ...walking by

time is frozen.. no movement

and so very still it lies.


If i could do it...

you would be mine

a very true love....

we both would find


But the moment... is over

now it's lost in time

it went by so fast

we missed the sign


It all could have happened

If we had just... let our minds

Open up..... to each other

As I walked By.......











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    • shalini sharan profile image

      shalini sharan 4 years ago from Delhi

      this is such a lovely composition

      voted up

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      BeyondMax 4 years ago from Sydney, Australia

      Oh, the world of possibilities! Michael, what a beautiful way to capture the moment! =)

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      rdsparrowriter 4 years ago

      Lovely poem Micheal :) Voted up and beautiful

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      harliquinn 4 years ago

      Very beautiful poem. I loved that you captured so much in that feeling we get in brief moments of meeting a mutual gaze.

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      KatrineDM 4 years ago

      Michael, your poem is not only beautiful, it also expresses a simple truth, which is the fact that our life truly is what we make it. Our decisions create our path...Often those decisions we make without too much thinking turn out to be the best ones in our life. We need to grasp every opportunity that comes our way.

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      cleaner3 4 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      @ shali, thank you for the comments.

      @ max, my good friend, thank you, glad you liked it.

      @sparrow, thank you my fine feathered friend.

      @harliquinn, thank you for the comments, thanks for the follow.

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      cleaner3 4 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      Katrine , thank you for the visit and comments. your insightful look at my poetry is appreciated and welcome .

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      PurvisBobbi44 4 years ago from Florida

      Hi cleaner3,

      A lovely poem so truthfully beautiful--- I loved it. Life is just a hop,skip and a jump and then it is over. Thanks for sharing another gem with us, and you sparkle and shine as a poet.

      Your Hub Friend,

      Bobbi Purvis

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      cleaner3 4 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      bobbi, my hub friend and loyal poet. thanks for the comments.!

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