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Autumn's Song, A Rendering

Updated on October 7, 2012
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Brilliant Analogy, that will never change




Reds and golds, in fine splendor,

All fall together, as the rain..

This fine scene, all to render.

As each year, in its refrain.




A time of wonder, a time of delight,

brilliance beyond compare, so bright.

As a death, would have it, by the Fall,

Its reawakening, is shared by all.




To be reborn and this so soon,

making spirits to all soar, then balloon,

by the light of a harvest moon.




Autumn's hold is grand, in deed,

with eager thoughts, we will concede,,

making trees' last stand, to plead..



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    • whonunuwho profile imageAUTHOR

      whonunuwho 

      5 years ago from United States

      A farewell to Autumn and we shall hope to see you in all of your splendor in next year.

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      whonunuwho 

      6 years ago from United States

      Thank you for your kind assessment, phdast7, much appreciated.

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      Theresa Ast 

      6 years ago from Atlanta, Georgia

      Wonderful words and pictures. Perfectly fitting for Fall. I love the photograph of the mother with her babies. So sweet. :)

    • whonunuwho profile imageAUTHOR

      whonunuwho 

      6 years ago from United States

      Autumn's Song , A Rendering, is a new poem that I have written because Hub Pages said I copied someone else. This I have never done. This kind of thing done by the Hub Pages leads me to feel like erasing all of my 334 hubs and start some place else.

    • whonunuwho profile imageAUTHOR

      whonunuwho 

      6 years ago from United States

      I wrote this work because Hub Pages said that I copied someone else in my writing. This I don't do , nor will I ever!

    • whonunuwho profile imageAUTHOR

      whonunuwho 

      6 years ago from United States

      Thank you girishpuri, for your favorable comments. I always appreciate these, and it gives me encouragement to write more.

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      Girish puri 

      6 years ago from NCR , INDIA

      awesome pics, awesome haiku, awesome autumn, brilliant work.

    • whonunuwho profile imageAUTHOR

      whonunuwho 

      6 years ago from United States

      ThanksMhatter, i thought I would try my hand at a few haiku style poetry forms and to see what might result.

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      Martin Kloess 

      6 years ago from San Francisco

      Foul! That last haiku was so "close to home" (in a good way) I cannot fairly judge the rest. Congratulations and thank you,

    • whonunuwho profile imageAUTHOR

      whonunuwho 

      6 years ago from United States

      Thanks so much, Faith Reaper. Autumn is one of the greatest times of the year and my favorite season.

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      Faith Reaper 

      6 years ago from southern USA

      Oh, so very lovely of the rebirth of a new season. Excellent write, and your photos and art are stunning!!! Voted Way Up God bless. In His Love, Faith Reaper

    • whonunuwho profile imageAUTHOR

      whonunuwho 

      6 years ago from United States

      Thanks so much,ignugent17, I really appreciate all the good responses. I enjoyed the challenge of writing in Haiku format.

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      ignugent17 

      6 years ago

      Wow! It is really captivating! The words are just perfect and I love the pictures too. " To reawaken, is shared" It is really full of mystery and charms.

      Voted up and more!

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      whonunuwho 

      6 years ago from United States

      Thanks Frank.Appreciate your response.

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      whonunuwho 

      6 years ago from United States

      Thanks for your response,craiglyn, I enjoy Spring, but Fall is what I look forward to the most.

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      whonunuwho 

      6 years ago from United States

      Thanks for your thumbs up, Bill.

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      whonunuwho 

      6 years ago from United States

      Thanks Audrey, my favorite time of the year,as well.

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      Audrey Howitt 

      6 years ago from California

      Ah first! This is a beautiful set--and fall is my favorite season!

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      Bill Holland 

      6 years ago from Olympia, WA

      That was very lovely work my friend; you captured the season perfectly.

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      Lynda 

      6 years ago from Ontario, Canada

      Thank you - I love fall - spring is my favourite, but fall is very close second and I love the way you said "As a death, their Fall,

      To reawaken, is shared."

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