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Autumn Season (Haiku)

Updated on July 21, 2012
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Calm flowing cool air

Array of colors on trees

Peaceful rest sustained


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      Joshua Zerbini 5 years ago from Pennsylvania

      Aubrey,

      Thanks buddy!

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      A.E. Williams 5 years ago from Hampton, GA

      Short and sweet, thanks for that Josh! :) That picture was perfect for this Haiku also.

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      Joshua Zerbini 5 years ago from Pennsylvania

      Paula,

      Well I am glad I was able to give your favorite season some justice! :)

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      Paula 5 years ago from Beautiful Upstate New York

      Josh...I must tell you....I positively adore Autumn!! My very favorite Season, here in WNY......the air, the beauty, the temperatures....it's all so perfect!! UP+++

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      Joshua Zerbini 5 years ago from Pennsylvania

      Jo,

      Thanks for your feedback, I love Autumn!

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      Jo Alexis-Hagues 5 years ago from Bedfordshire, U.K

      Great haiku, Autumn can indeed be a time of calm and beauty. Well done

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      Joshua Zerbini 5 years ago from Pennsylvania

      Maria,

      Thanks for the feedback hub friend! :) Hugs back atcha! :)

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      Maria Jordan 5 years ago from Jeffersonville PA

      Clean, crisp and cool... like a fall day!

      Fabulous work-- Voted UP & Awesome. Hugs, Maria

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      Joshua Zerbini 5 years ago from Pennsylvania

      Dahlia,

      Thanks! You are absolutely right!

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      Joshua Zerbini 5 years ago from Pennsylvania

      Lucky,

      Thanks, really appreciate that so much!

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      Joshua Zerbini 5 years ago from Pennsylvania

      Vicki,

      Thanks for the share and yes, I do long for Fall!

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      Dahlia Flower 5 years ago from Canada

      Beautiful. Freedom from anxiety, peacefulness comes through.

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      Kathy 5 years ago from The beautiful Napa Valley, California

      Hi Josh! Your words and the beautiful fall colors over calm waters is serenity maximum as well a perfectly peaceful picture! Beautiful! Awesome! UP! and Relaxing!!

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      Victoria Lynn 5 years ago from Arkansas, USA

      This is so peaceful and makes me long for fall after this hot summer. Great job, Josh! Many votes! Sharing this one.

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      Joshua Zerbini 5 years ago from Pennsylvania

      Beckie,

      That is awesome! I would love that as a backyard! Photos please! Or even better hub? :)

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      Shining Irish Eyes 5 years ago from Upstate, New York

      Beautiful Josh.

      The photo looks like my back yard. Reading your beautiful haiku made me realize how lucky I am.

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      Joshua Zerbini 5 years ago from Pennsylvania

      Nancy,

      Glad you enjoyed it, Autumn truly is a beautiful season!

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      Nancy Yager 5 years ago from Hamburg, New York

      A beautiful Autumn Day. Thanks for the reminder of those crisp cool days and of the road trips we take just to see the beautiful leaves.

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      Joshua Zerbini 5 years ago from Pennsylvania

      TT,

      Thanks! I really appreciate that! :)

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      Terrye Toombs 5 years ago from Somewhere between Heaven and Hell without a road map.

      Nice work, Josh, it came out great. :)

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      Joshua Zerbini 5 years ago from Pennsylvania

      Mhatter99,

      Thanks so much buddy! :)

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      Martin Kloess 5 years ago from San Francisco

      Impressive play on opposites. congratulations

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      Joshua Zerbini 5 years ago from Pennsylvania

      Glimmer,

      Thanks, appreciate the feedback!

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      Glimmer Twin Fan 5 years ago

      Just beautiful and so peaceful.

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      Joshua Zerbini 5 years ago from Pennsylvania

      jen,

      Thanks for the positive feedback! It is beautiful up North during the Fall! :)

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      jennzie 5 years ago from Lower Bucks County, PA

      Nice poem and gorgeous picture. I especially like going up north to the mountains during autumn, as it gets particularly beautiful there.

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      Joshua Zerbini 5 years ago from Pennsylvania

      Julie,

      I just LOL'ed! Thanks :)

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      Joshua Zerbini 5 years ago from Pennsylvania

      Mary,

      Thanks for your feedback! I appreciate it! I love Autumn!

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      Joshua Zerbini 5 years ago from Pennsylvania

      Julie,

      I will think about that and write one sometime! :) Pumpkins Unite! LOL

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      Blurter of Indiscretions 5 years ago from Clinton CT

      Oh crap..I just realized this was a Haiku, not a limerick! I'm smart, I promise.

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      Mary Craig 5 years ago from New York

      I have to agree with Billy, the last line is a keeper! The whole autumn haiku is also written at a time when we are all wishing for autumn...living in the northeast anyway!

      Voted up and beautiful.

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      Blurter of Indiscretions 5 years ago from Clinton CT

      I'd like to put in a request for a pumpkin limerick please! This one was beautiful (reminding me of my most favorite season), but we cannot forget about the pumpkins! -Sincerely, Pumpkins Unite. :) *Seriously though, fall is my FAVORITE!

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      Joshua Zerbini 5 years ago from Pennsylvania

      Gypsy,

      Thanks! :) I like the picture too!

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      Joshua Zerbini 5 years ago from Pennsylvania

      Marlene,

      Thanks so much, glad you liked it! And thanks for the awesome comment!

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      Joshua Zerbini 5 years ago from Pennsylvania

      Christy,

      Thanks, yeah we all are, but Autumn is the next best thing! :)

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      Gypsy Rose Lee 5 years ago from Riga, Latvia

      Just lovely Josh. Autumn really is colorful. Love the pic.

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      lovedoctor926 5 years ago

      Awesome picture you have painted here. Josh, you are getting very good at writing limericks and haikus. Lovely image too. Voted up!

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      Joshua Zerbini 5 years ago from Pennsylvania

      Linda,

      Thanks, always appreciate your comments and your support! Glad you enjoyed this Haiku. :)

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      Linda Bilyeu 5 years ago from Orlando, FL

      Beautiful photo and matching haiku Josh! Makes me ready for fall, but in Florida this would be our winter :)

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      Christy Birmingham 5 years ago from British Columbia, Canada

      Ah, peaceful indeed! For now I am enjoying the summer weather :)

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      Joshua Zerbini 5 years ago from Pennsylvania

      kygirl,

      You are welcome, and glad you enjoyed it! :)

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      kygirl89 5 years ago from West Virginia

      Autumn is very relaxing and peaceful. I usually feel very inspired to write during that time of year. It just feels like there's magic in the air. Thanks for sharing.

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      Joshua Zerbini 5 years ago from Pennsylvania

      Bill,

      Thanks so much! Yes it will take work! Thanks for the encouragement! :)

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      Bill Holland 5 years ago from Olympia, WA

      The last line is the best! Still waiting for that twins hub! You can be a good writer, Josh, but like anything that really matters, it takes work. You can do it.....and I'll be here to watch!

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      Joshua Zerbini 5 years ago from Pennsylvania

      Jen,

      Thanks for your beautiful feedback! :) I really appreciate it!

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      Joshua Zerbini 5 years ago from Pennsylvania

      Janine,

      Awesome! That's great you were able to catch up for the most part! :)

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      Jennifer Stone 5 years ago from the Riverbank, England

      Beautifully crafted haiku my friend, and feelings I relate to because I feel them every day on my little patch of riverbank! :-) All the best, Jen

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      Janine Huldie 5 years ago from New York, New York

      Josh, very much agreed on autumn being beautiful, but how I love summer. Again, no problem glad to support you on here. I think I have caught up a bit and of course no the weekend is upon us!

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      Joshua Zerbini 5 years ago from Pennsylvania

      Janine,

      Thanks for your continual support! It is so encouraging! Yes, I know what you mean, summer is amazing, but autumn is beautiful! Lol. Have a great day Janine! Are you caught up now for the most part?

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      Janine Huldie 5 years ago from New York, New York

      Beautiful poem as usual here, but making me realize that autumn is around the corner is not fair. Not ready for it to be honest, need a bit more of summer. Seriously, loved this as usual and voted up and shared too.

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      Joshua Zerbini 5 years ago from Pennsylvania

      Debbie,

      Glad you enjoyed it! I love the picture as well!

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      Joshua Zerbini 5 years ago from Pennsylvania

      Dgh,

      Thanks so much for your awesome feedback!

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      Joshua Zerbini 5 years ago from Pennsylvania

      Michelle,

      Thanks glad you enjoyed it!

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      Joshua Zerbini 5 years ago from Pennsylvania

      Made,

      Thanks, glad you thought it was beautiful!

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      Joshua Zerbini 5 years ago from Pennsylvania

      Snow,

      Heyya snow! It is an awesome season!

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      Joshua Zerbini 5 years ago from Pennsylvania

      Lathing,

      Thanks, I am glad you enjoyed it!

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      Joshua Zerbini 5 years ago from Pennsylvania

      M,

      Thanks, I could definitely take some cool weather about now. Lol

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      Joshua Zerbini 5 years ago from Pennsylvania

      Katrine,

      Thanks for the positive feedback!

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      KatrineDM 5 years ago

      Yes, that sums it up well :-)

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      IAmForbidden 5 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up.

      Hi J. This is awesome! all my votes!

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      LaThing 5 years ago from From a World Within, USA

      Love the Fall..... Nothing can beat it! Your Haiku is pretty good :)

      Beautiful .......

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      snowdrops 5 years ago from The Second Star to the Right

      Beautiful..autumn is one of my dream season :)

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      Madeleine Salin 5 years ago from Finland

      Those twelve words says it all. Beautiful!

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      Michelle Liew 5 years ago from Singapore

      Wish I could experience the seasons here! Good one!

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      deergha 5 years ago from ...... a place beyond now and beyond here !!!

      Its awesome......my mind got completely relaxed.....voting up, awesome, beautiful and sharing:-)

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      Deborah Brooks Langford 5 years ago from Brownsville,TX

      Oh yes I want Fall.. and coolness.. beautifully done.. the picture is beautiful makes me want to go to the mountains.

      Debbie

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      Joshua Zerbini 5 years ago from Pennsylvania

      Joseph,

      Thanks! Yeah the heat is getting crazy! No worries, I know what you mean. :)

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      Joseph De Cross 5 years ago

      Pretty much captured the visuals dear Josh! Hope this heat gets over on Northern U.S. Take care friend! Always will come around. Hard to keep up with followers LOL!