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Autumn in my Heart ~haiku~

Updated on March 12, 2013

A haiku about a love once lost one Autumn season


They started to fall

The golden crisp maple leaves

Saying sad goodbyes


Like a love once lost

Softly carved with the season

Remembered once more


Swaying as it falls

And finding a place to rest

To wait for winter


Like a heart waiting

For the smile of tomorrow

Letting go of pain


© 2012 Mycee. All Rights Reserved.

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      deergha 4 years ago from ...... a place beyond now and beyond here !!!

      awesome....thank you for this one.

      voting up.....and sharing

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      IAmForbidden 4 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up.

      Oh Thank you deergha! lovely message!

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      Terrye Toombs 4 years ago from Somewhere between Heaven and Hell without a road map.

      Hiya, Spy! A very beautiful haiku about Autumn. Nicely done! I could almost feel the slight crispness in the air and hear the dry leaves scattered across the ground.

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      Faith Reaper 4 years ago from southern USA

      Very beautiful. Excellent piece. In His Love, Faith Reaper

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      IAmForbidden 4 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up.

      TT! Miss yah.. Thank you for stopping by and for this extra special message for me :) lovelots.

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      IAmForbidden 4 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up.

      Faith, thank you. hugsss

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      [ Danson Wachira ] 4 years ago from Nairobi, Kenya

      Great work and crafted in a special way. Voted up.

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      Thomas Silvia 4 years ago from Massachusetts

      Hi M. Autumn is such a beautiful time of the season but also can be a sad time has well, it so mimic your poem !

      Vote up and more !!!

      Have a great week my friend !

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      alphonse george 4 years ago from Kerala,India

      Beautiful work.You inspire me.

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      Mark G Weller 4 years ago from Lake Charles, LA.

      Beautiful and simple M!

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      Bill Holland 4 years ago from Olympia, WA

      Is there a more beautiful time of year than Autumn? I don't think so....you did a wonderful job with this poem; captured the season perfectly.

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      Shauna L Bowling 4 years ago from Central Florida

      Beautiful, Spy! I think you've found your "voice", as Bill says!

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      Joshua Zerbini 4 years ago from Pennsylvania

      M,

      Beautiful haikus M! Just beautiful, I could envision the leaves falling! Awesome job M! :)

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      Michelle Liew 4 years ago from Singapore

      A beautiful celebration of Autumn! A poem well written. Voted up and sharing.

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      kjforce 4 years ago from Florida

      unknown spy....that was awesome...it " leaved " me breathless.......

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      Deb Hirt 4 years ago from Stillwater, OK

      Make it so.

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      Genna East 4 years ago from Massachusetts, USA

      I loved this. When I read the title, I thought, autumn is in my heart as well. Then, when I read this beautiful peom, I fell in love with the metaphor and imagery.

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      Joyce Haragsim 4 years ago from Southern Nevada

      Brilliant poem that's is a delight to read.

      voted up and awesome, Joyce.

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      Larry Wall 4 years ago

      As I read your submissions, I am noticing that you have a tremendous ability for noticing the small details which can make a difference in a poem, a story, a book and even a life. Keep up the good work my friend.

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      Pamela Oglesby 4 years ago from United States

      I love autumn and this is a very beautiful Haiku.

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      Ruby Jean Fuller 4 years ago from Southern Illinois

      Beautiful.. I love the fall when the leaves drop covering our precious plants..

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      Dianna Mendez 4 years ago

      Love how you connected love to seasons of life. Fall is beautiful but also brings a passing of time as the color fades.

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      Martin Kloess 4 years ago from San Francisco

      you did yourself proud

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      IAmForbidden 4 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up.

      @Dwachira, Kashmir, Alphonse, Mark, Billy, Brave, J(osh), Michelle, KJF, DEb, Genna, Joyce, Pamela, Larry, Ruby, Teaches, Mhatter

      All my thanks and huggs to you my friends for reading and leaving a wonderful comment. I really appreciate it much!

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      Vinaya Ghimire 4 years ago from Nepal

      Spring is my dream,

      Rain is sadness

      autumn my longing!

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      Movie Master 4 years ago from United Kingdom

      Absolutely lovely - well done and voted up!

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      IAmForbidden 4 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up.

      @ Vinaya

      @ Lesley

      Thank you for the votes + messages :)

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      Debby Bruck 4 years ago

      Hi Unknown ~ Are you now anticipating fall or already in that season? We are in the midst of summer heat. The refreshing bright yellow leaves were appealing to the senses. Another lovely poem. Debby

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      IAmForbidden 4 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up.

      Hello Debby..i just love to write about the autumn season and the sadness that accompanies a broken heart.

      thanks for stopping by.

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      Gypsy Rose Lee 4 years ago from Riga, Latvia

      Voted up and beautiful. Such a lovely and sad poem. Autumn although it is beautiful it always get me down.

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      IAmForbidden 4 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up.

      Hello Gypsy! How are you? Thanks for stopping by and for the message.

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      Rosemary Sadler 4 years ago from Hawkes Bay - NewZealand

      You have my votes. This is simply breathtaking. It is one of the most beautiful collections of Haiku I've read.

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      Ethan Green 4 years ago from England

      very poignant as always Miss Spy:-) keep up the fine work!

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      IAmForbidden 4 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up.

      Rosemay, thank you much! (smiles**)

      Ethan, cant help but smile to read "miss spy'. hehehe thanks for stopping by :)

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      Richard Ricky Hale 4 years ago from West Virginia

      This is a very good poem Unknown spy. I love the emotion that one can find in it. I love Autumn. It is my favorite time of the year and I can't wait, just a few more months to go:)

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      IAmForbidden 4 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up.

      Hello the lyricwriter. thanks for appreciating...well, i just hope we have Autumn season too..

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      Maria Jordan 4 years ago from Jeffersonville PA

      Rich with imagery, leaving a profound memory. UP and AB...

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      IAmForbidden 4 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up.

      Maria. what a nice surprise! thanks a lot for your lovely comment. as lovely as you :)

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      A.E. Williams 4 years ago from Hampton, GA

      So cool! :) Your writing makes me day! Keep em coming!

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      IAmForbidden 4 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up.

      Hello Aubrey! wow, thank you for this very wonderful message!

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      Demas W Jasper 4 years ago from Today's America and The World Beyond

      Up, Awesome, and Beautiful (and I actually marked them all, too!)

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      IAmForbidden 4 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up.

      Hi Pers..thank you for stopping by

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      Audrey Howitt 4 years ago from California

      I especially loved the last set--wonderful imagery!

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      Jamie Lee Hamann 4 years ago from Reno NV

      So incredible. Thank you for sharing these well written Haiku's. Jamie

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      Senoritaa 4 years ago

      This is a brilliant set of Haiku. I can feel the passion of the two seasons and their respective beauties in your words.

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      IAmForbidden 4 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up.

      Hello Audrey, Jamie, Senoritaa.. thanks for the wonderful comments!

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      James Bowden 4 years ago from Long Island, New York

      Mycee:

      I've learned to appreciate the art of poetry lately and your poem here is not only one that I found beautiful, but also one that I couldn't help to vote up as well. A wonderful read indeed, that reminds us that Autumn will soon be here. Slowly unleashing the sweltering heat of the summer sun. Thank you for sharing your poetical talent with all of us here on hubpages.

      Jlbowden

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      IAmForbidden 4 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up.

      JL, that was a very amazing and lovely comment! thank you so much for taking time and appreciate this haiku. Autum is coming unraveling a memory once forgotten.

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      Audrey Howitt 4 years ago from California

      I came back for another read as I am feeling "fallish" today--Just lovely!!!

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      Madeleine Salin 4 years ago from Finland

      I enjoyed this poem very much. Beautiful...

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      Olde Cashmere 4 years ago from Michigan, United States

      Remarkable writing M, another beautiful poem. Voting up, sharing, and rating beautiful, awesome, and interesting :)

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      oceansider 4 years ago

      Dear M....hello, how are you?

      I just loved this haiku....it's so lovely!.....I am voting this up and beautiful too!.......

      Take care & I pray that God will send many blessings to you!

      Helen

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      IAmForbidden 4 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up.

      Audrey, Made, James, Helen..

      what a lovely surprise visit! thank you so much for the wonderful messages :)

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      Rajan Singh Jolly 4 years ago from From Mumbai, presently in Jalandhar,INDIA.

      A very beautiful poem and you captured the pain of a lost love very well in the fall of the autumn leaves.

      Voted up and beautiful.

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      IAmForbidden 4 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up.

      Hi Rajan. what a lovely comment. thank you for reading :)

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      Mary Hyatt 4 years ago from Florida

      I missed this beautiful poem before. So glad I found it.

      Beautiful I voted this UP, and will share.

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      IAmForbidden 4 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up.

      Oh Mary, thank you so much for the read!

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      Debby Bruck 4 years ago

      Waiting for the end of autumn for those leaves to turn golden. Right now, happy that the air has cooled from a long hot summer. Blessings, Debby

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      IAmForbidden 4 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up.

      hi debby. thank you for visiting the autumn in my heart. take care!

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