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Autumn...The Ripples of Fall

Updated on October 2, 2015
AUTUMN...a melancholic whisper that reaches the heart
AUTUMN...a melancholic whisper that reaches the heart
Beauty ... that was!
Beauty ... that was!
withering away...
withering away...
....will bloom again
....will bloom again

Fallen leaves

from the high rise trees,

a soft, sad crunch

and a quiet wheeze;

These smokey eves

speaks of a change

that rules the air;

A melancholic breeze

whispers in the silence

that fall is here...

Everywhere.

From scarlets and browns

and the hues of gold,

are the blazing shades

of the beauty untold;

This mood in the air

with a beauty of its own,

reveals a secret

in its silent tones,

that nothing is forever;

And fall is here...

Everywhere.

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      Dawar 21 months ago

      Yes, so true, nothing in this world is forever. Beautiful poem. Leaves on top of the trees that once defied strong winds, get blown away by a simple breeze in Autumn, so helplessly. story of our lives !!

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      Rozina Iftikhar 23 months ago from Islamabad

      Thanks for the visit and kind words.

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      Nasser Deen 23 months ago

      I loved it.

      It is beautiful and the imagery joy to read.

      Wonderful job.

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      Rozina Iftikhar 23 months ago from Islamabad

      Yes Khala...that was my point...nothing lasts forever...thanks for catching the wavelength...

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      Khursheed 23 months ago

      Very poetic discription of Autumn. A poignant reminder that nothing last forever.

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      Rozina Iftikhar 23 months ago from Islamabad

      Aww!!! so sweet of u Yumna...thank you dear for being so generous in your comment.

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      Yumna wasti 23 months ago

      I bet after reading this poem everybody must have fallen in love with autumn

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      Rozina Iftikhar 23 months ago from Islamabad

      I'm glad that you liked it. Thanks for the visit.

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      Abbas 23 months ago

      Very nice! Great selection of words!

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      Rozina Iftikhar 23 months ago from Islamabad

      I would love to that...if you keep reading and appreciating...thanks Samina...

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      Samina 23 months ago

      Wowww

      What a lovely desciption

      Keep writing n sharing

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      Rozina Iftikhar 23 months ago from Islamabad

      Flattered! I must say...thanks again Jodah.

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      John Hansen 23 months ago from Queensland Australia

      You are welcome Rozina, welcome to Hub Pages.

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      Rozina Iftikhar 23 months ago from Islamabad

      It is really so kind of you, Bahzi...to comment so genrously...and sure I would keep sharing if you people would keep providing me such a responsive audience...thanks a lot.

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      Rozina Iftikhar 23 months ago from Islamabad

      Suraj...

      I really needed this encouragement and appreciation at this stage to catch the pace... your comment is a green signal for me!" thank you" would be a modest expresion here...but still, thanks a lot

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      Rozina Iftikhar 23 months ago from Islamabad

      Jodah...I don't know what to say. Honestly, I was not expecting comments from "seasoned" and experienced writers...your comment came as a pleasant surprise... you made my day!

      thanks beyond words..

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      Muhammad Naeem 23 months ago from United Kingdom

      what a wonderful piece of poetry .I read this poem 3 times , and every time i read it brings new meanings for me , some where i am feeling nostalgic.

      in last i would like to say , keep writing , and keep sharing .stay blessed.

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      suraj punjabi 23 months ago from jakarta

      Great poem! Anyone who can write such a great poem about something that occurs naturally is indeed gifted! Keep it up!!

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      John Hansen 23 months ago from Queensland Australia

      This is a beautiful poem Rozina, you described autumn perfectly. I love the term "high rise trees". If this is an indication of your other poetry I need to go read more. Thank you.

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      Rozina Iftikhar 23 months ago from Islamabad

      Saima, Sam and Fatima...thanks a lot .

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      Fatima Anwar 23 months ago

      Wow. Amazimg words. :)

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      Saimasajid 74 23 months ago

      Its speechless no words to express my emotions well done

      Allah blesss U:-)

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      Rozina Iftikhar 23 months ago from Islamabad

      Thanks for your kind words...thanks beyond words!

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      Rozina Iftikhar 23 months ago from Islamabad

      Thanks for liking it...

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      Ralph Schwartz 23 months ago from Idaho Falls, Idaho

      Descriptive piece, flows very well - nice job

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      Rozina Iftikhar 24 months ago from Islamabad

      Thank you for the appreciation...it means a lot to me.

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      whonunuwho 24 months ago from United States

      beautiful tribute to a wonderful time of the year. Well done my friend. whonu