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Awwwsome Dad Sees Son Perform (limerick)

Updated on November 4, 2012

I went to see son in school play

Such talent did my boy display

Such poise not a faker

For all this dream maker

World’s best ticket taker I’d say


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      Gypsy Rose Lee 5 years ago from Riga, Latvia


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      Karen Silverman 5 years ago

      LOL..take pride in your work - whatever it may be..

      adorable, M..

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      Shining Irish Eyes 5 years ago from Upstate, New York

      Awe - Such an adorable read my friend.

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      picklesandrufus 5 years ago from Virginia Beach, Va

      cute twist at the end! Enjoyed

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      Ruby Jean Fuller 5 years ago from Southern Illinois

      Hey, Maybe someday he will be on stage making you a proud Papa. Loved it..

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      SweetiePie 5 years ago from Southern California, USA

      Short, but cool!

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      Jamie Lee Hamann 5 years ago from Reno NV

      Very nice. Jamie

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      Valleypoet 5 years ago

      His entrance was the best.LOL :-))

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      Pamela Oglesby 5 years ago from United States

      That limerick is adorable and anything about our children is extra special. Your support of him will help him grow into a well balanced man. Awesome hub.

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      Linda Crist 5 years ago from Central Virginia

      Always a surprise. And, a great reminder that every job is important and must be done by someone. A great job is a job done well. Great job!

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      Rich 5 years ago from Kentucky

      Any job is a great job when it's your kid. Speaking of this, Great Job!

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      flashmakeit 5 years ago from usa

      Ticket sellers do well on Broadwaybecause they can get autographs easily.

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      Bill Holland 5 years ago from Olympia, WA

      LOL....there is a boy with a future!

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      whonunuwho 5 years ago from United States

      Great work and praise for your son. I know he will be a success because his dad is such a winner.

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      Faith Reaper 5 years ago from southern USA

      Ha. Great twist at the end as always, very unexpected.

      Voted up, awesome and funny

      God bless. In His Love, Faith Reaper

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      Deb Hirt 5 years ago from Stillwater, OK

      A terrific final line that I didn't expect.

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      wetnosedogs 5 years ago from Alabama

      Great one. We all have to start somewhere.