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Buried Soul

Updated on May 1, 2014

By: Wayne Brown

Be quiet! Listen!  Do you hear it?  The sound, do you hear it?  I do.  I hear it all the time.  It is there ever present in my ear constantly nagging at my brain.  I fear I will go crazy from its incessant rasp upon my mind.  I cannot think straight anymore for the sound distracts me to no end.  It is all consuming, overwhelming, and yet you say you do not hear it. How could that be?


It is a horrid scratching sound.  One I would imagine a man to make who was buried alive and clawing at his encasement in one last feeble attempt to free himself of this horrible loneliness and solitude.  The desperation to escape the close quarters and stark darkness of his eternal rest and run into the light so clearly comes through with each rasping scratch of his bloody fingers, the futility of his efforts foretold in his own mind.


If I knew from where this sound was coming, I would run quickly to his aid.  For you see, my soul lies in this dark place with him and screams to be released.  Each time I hear the scratching I am reminded of the urgency to locate this poor victim and release my own soul to the light and fresh air of day.  Can you not hear it?  It is so loud, so loud!  The desire to escape echoes with each rake of the nails against the wood as the precious air within the chamber is consumed by the panic.  Oh, I must find it, I must!


Can a man’s soul be so tortured, so trapped that it would reach out to him in such a horrid manner?  To cry out in bloody scratches upon the splintered wood that is its prison, to cry out, for someone, anyone to release it.  Is there any greater futility than not knowing where to look when every rake upon the wood burns into your brain the need for discovery of this torturous fate?  My soul must be released from this prison but where must I look, the hour draws near?


Do you not hear it?  For God’s sakes, how could you not?  My heart bleeds from the torture of the constant rasp upon the wood.  There are no screams, no shouts, no crying, just the scratching upon the wood.  Oh if you could only hear then maybe then you could help me locate it and end this misery that has befallen my mind.  My soul is buried alive and hidden away to die.  Dear God, can you not hear?


Go now! Take leave of my presence for I must face this agony alone.  I shall not have you here before me staring on in shock and bewilderment while I suffer this hideous insanity.  My soul is crying out, man! Surely you must hear it, you must hear it!  Listen closely! Hear the bloody fingers on the wood?  I must find this prison soon or I will surely lose my mind.  Do you not hear it?



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      Wayne Brown 7 years ago from Texas

      LJ...I had the same sense once I had finished it. I also felt a bit insane! Thank you for that compliment...let's see if I can sustain! WB

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      ladyjane1 7 years ago from Texas

      Wayne this hub reminded me of the Tell Tale Heart by Edgar Allen Poe it was just as creepy and well written. You have more talent than you think my fellow Texan. Cheers.

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      Wayne Brown 7 years ago from Texas

      OOOOOOO! Glad you liked it Sam...I would have made it longer but I cannot handle insanity that long! WB

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      samboiam 7 years ago from Texas

      Oh my that was creepy. I think I'll go back and read it again.

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      Wayne Brown 7 years ago from Texas

      SilverGenes...they are exhaustive too. I have to try to imagine myself in that person's mindset. That's the reason they are not longer...I can't stay in there! Thanks for the good words! WB

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      SilverGenes 7 years ago

      Your visits to the dark, closed-in spaces of madness are the stuff of nightmares! Well done - again!

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      Wayne Brown 7 years ago from Texas

      Yes, Tom...can you not hear them, hear them scratching! WB

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      Tom Whitworth 7 years ago from Moundsville, WV


      We all have our demons to face scratching on the wood. It's is hideous!!!!!!!!