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Be WARE OF THE COLORS OF LOVE

Updated on October 21, 2011
she came and she left
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Be WARE  of THE COLORS OF LOVE

My heart aches,

Waiting for the last beat;

In the castle of life,

In the jungle of my thoughts;

Like the spring butterfly;

She came,

She saw,

And she sucked,

The essence of life;

And left;

Left,

My heart;

In the prison of life;

Waiting for the last beat,

To survive.

Copyright© Asma Iftikhar

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      cleaner3 5 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      Yessss. very nice. i like it.

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      Maria Jordan 5 years ago from Jeffersonville PA

      Taut yet tender, this packs a powerful message.

      I am very impressed with you style and will eagerly come back to check out more of your work. Voted UP & AB, mar.

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      asmaiftikhar 5 years ago from Pakistan

      thanks epi thats my honor that you like my poem.many many thanks for encouraging me.

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      epigramman 5 years ago

      .....yes these are words of poetic majesty and the beauty is all here on your canvas to see .....

      lake erie time ontario canada 1:19pm

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      asmaiftikhar 5 years ago from Pakistan

      Thanks Bella for liking and commenting on my hub.

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      Bella Nina 5 years ago from USA

      Words beautifully woven.

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      asmaiftikhar 5 years ago from Pakistan

      Thanks Shobis for the clarity.thanks a lot dear.

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      shobis 5 years ago from Pakistan

      Suggstion is for the readers not for u :)

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      asmaiftikhar 5 years ago from Pakistan

      Thanks Shobis for liking my hub and suggestion.

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      shobis 5 years ago from Pakistan

      Genius at work ,Concentration Required .

      Great Lines

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      asmaiftikhar 5 years ago from Pakistan

      Thanks Kerlynb for liking my poem. i know you are not very interested in poetry but thats my pleasure u red that poem and like it.

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      kerlynb 5 years ago from Philippines, Southeast Asia, Earth ^_^

      And she sucked,

      The essence of life;

      And left;"

      - Very thought-proving lines. Very deep, mysterious. Well-written poem, congratulations :)

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      shanaya 5 years ago from Living in my Own Dreams:)

      Hey My Dear Friend! Its a very Heartfelt poem. Truly came from Heart it seems. Love to read.

      Voted up, Awesome, Interesting.

      With Love & Respect

      from SHANAYA:)

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      asmaiftikhar 5 years ago from Pakistan

      Thanks lilly for stopping and commenting on my hub.would write more inshalla.

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      lilly 5 years ago

      i found this hub and your thoughts insist me to write a comment that its a lovely worth praising poem..wd come again..waiting for other gems.. :)

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      asmaiftikhar 5 years ago from Pakistan

      Many many thanks for liking and appreciating my poem.Thats your kindness that you like my hubs.

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      Alexander Thandi Ubani 5 years ago from Lagos

      Sad and bitter. Words stretching my own thoughts. Awesome and beautiful, i voted.

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      asmaiftikhar 5 years ago from Pakistan

      Thanks mondkill for stopping and commenting on my hub.And feel good to see you here after along period.

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      mondkill 5 years ago

      lovely poem... :) I LIKE! VOTE UP....

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      asmaiftikhar 5 years ago from Pakistan

      Thanks clover for reading and commenting on my hub.and for following me .Thats your kindness and humbleness that you like my work.many many many thanks.

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      Cloverleaf 5 years ago from Calgary, AB, Canada

      Awesome composition, so dark and mysterious - as love can sometimes be! I hope she comes back to brighten up those colors. Voted up!

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      asmaiftikhar 5 years ago from Pakistan

      Thanks mac thats my honor that you like my poem.

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      asmaiftikhar 5 years ago from Pakistan

      Thanks gail for liking and appreciating my poem.

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      gailalovesbijou 5 years ago from Wyomissing, PA

      Beautiful, sad, thought provoking. "Jungle of my thoughts" is such a perfect line. Thank you!

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      Mac McGovern 5 years ago

      The creativity and imagery are superb. One of those short poems that grabs and holds. The talent is obvious.