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Becoming One With the Sun

Updated on February 6, 2015
The sun dancing off the water
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This poem was written back in my hippie days. Nature was and continues to be my energizing force and triggers most of my inspiration. Please take the time to view the video I chose to accompany this piece. I have actually met and shared nature with the artist at several Miccosukee music festivals in the Florida Keys. He his an honorary member of the Miccosukee tribe and sings each year at the annual festival; one of few to which "white man" is invited.




On the gray and lonely

Days

When all seems forsaken


A vision comes through

My soul

And lifts

My spirits.


The Sun,

Dancing off the water,

The trees,

Gently swaying

In the breeze –


All seems to be celebrating

Life.


The dreary thoughts

Melt away

And the warmth

Comes back to my Soul.


Becoming one with

The sun


In Celebration.





Shauna L Bowling

Refining, Defining or Rhyming

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© 2012 Shauna L Bowling

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    • bravewarrior profile imageAUTHOR

      Shauna L Bowling 

      2 years ago from Central Florida

      MelRootsNWrites, thank you for your comment. I often lift my face to the sun, close my eyes, and breathe in. It really does seem to energize me.

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      Melody Lassalle 

      2 years ago from California

      Beautiful poem. It really captures the ability of nature to revitalize us. Something as simple as sitting in the sun on a warm day can make us feel rejuvenated.

    • bravewarrior profile imageAUTHOR

      Shauna L Bowling 

      4 years ago from Central Florida

      Yum. Sounds good. I had some fresh pineapple and some potato chips. Kinda like having a cheeseburger with a diet coke, huh? :-)

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      epigramman 

      4 years ago

      Well Shauna it goes both ways as you know and you have been a good Hub friend to me as well as an esteemed colleague - just about to have lunch here with some sausages on a bun with sauerkraut and sweet'nspicy mustard.

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      Shauna L Bowling 

      4 years ago from Central Florida

      Epi, it doesn't surprise me in the least that you relate to this poem. Thanx for sharing. Your support just blows me away! Hugs to all three of you from sunny/rainy Florida.

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      epigramman 

      4 years ago

      Good afternoon my sensational Shauna from lake erie time 1:43pm and big Canadian hugs from the three of us - Colin, Tiffy and Gabriel.

      Yes I am 'one' with the sun, the moon and the stars too and everything in-between like the lake itself and communing with my cats so I very much relate to your pure and wonderful words here in which I will post and link to my FB page.

      Have a happy , safe and beautiful day my friend

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      Shauna L Bowling 

      5 years ago from Central Florida

      Eddy, my lordy I am so far behind! I apogogize for just now seeing your comment. Coming from a poet such as yourself, whom I admire greatly, your words have a profound resonance in my soul. Thank you my friend!

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      Eiddwen 

      5 years ago from Wales

      So truly beautiful and I 100% relate to each verse.

      You are a wonderful poet and I look forward to so many more hubs for us both to share on here.

      Have a great day.

      Eddy.

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      Shauna L Bowling 

      5 years ago from Central Florida

      I'm so pleased to see you cruising my corner Poet! Thank you for you support!

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      TheAveragePoet 

      5 years ago from Here and there.

      A most beautiful poem filled with bright messages. Enjoyed.

    • bravewarrior profile imageAUTHOR

      Shauna L Bowling 

      5 years ago from Central Florida

      Thanx for stopping by, Dyhannah! I'm pleased you enjoyed my poem!

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      Dyhannah 

      5 years ago from Texas

      Thanks for sharing your simply beautiful poem from your hippie days which is still so relevant and alive today. I also loved the photos and enjoyed the video.

    • bravewarrior profile imageAUTHOR

      Shauna L Bowling 

      5 years ago from Central Florida

      Mwaaah to you Spy!

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      IAmForbidden 

      5 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up.

      wow marvelous photos and very beautiful poetry sha!

    • bravewarrior profile imageAUTHOR

      Shauna L Bowling 

      5 years ago from Central Florida

      Thank you Martie! I also live in the land of perpetual sun, except for the rainy season, which is June thru October! Florida is called the Sunshine State. However, I too was a wanna be hippie. My heart was there, but being born in 1957, I wasn't exactly free to live the movement in the 60's. My heart has always been there and still is today. Including the rebelliousness. I've always been a rebel, but stop to smell the roses.

      Sadly, we don't see beauty nor do we speak up against that which offends us. It's kept to sites like this instead of being shouted out as the hippies during the Vietnam era did.

      Sad.

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      Martie Coetser 

      5 years ago from South Africa

      I am so glad I live in a country where the sun shines unhampered by clouds almost all the days of a year. I am a hippie by heart, but I never had the opportunity to be a hippie. Even while I lived for 2 years among them, too many responsibilities kept me from becoming a genuine hippie. This is a beautiful poem!

    • bravewarrior profile imageAUTHOR

      Shauna L Bowling 

      5 years ago from Central Florida

      Maria, you're a woman after my own hippie heart. I'm honored to have you think of me whenever you hear this song. Awesom!

    • bravewarrior profile imageAUTHOR

      Shauna L Bowling 

      5 years ago from Central Florida

      And I enjoyed sharing it! Thanx for sending me back to wonderful memories, Gail! Enjoy your day!

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      Maria Jordan 

      5 years ago from Jeffersonville PA

      Sha.

      So kewl...love that story. I shall think of you every time I hear this fabulous song. Love, Maria

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      Gail Sobotkin 

      5 years ago from South Carolina

      Wow. Thanks for sharing this awesome experience. I really enjoyed reading about it.

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      Shauna L Bowling 

      5 years ago from Central Florida

      It was awesome spending time with Richie Havens, Gail. I had written a TV commercial for the Miccosukee Indians and kinda hung out with the acting Chief. He and his brother had a rock band called "Tiger Tiger". Lee Tiger, who is now Chief, was acting Chief for his aging father. Richie Havens performs each year at the Miccosukee Music Festival held in Key Marathon, in a stone outdoor amphitheater.

      I sat about 10 feet from the stage and was invited backstage when his performance was over. It was pretty awesome!

      I'm glad you like my poem and can appreciate Richie Havens. I like his rendition best!

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      Gail Sobotkin 

      5 years ago from South Carolina

      Loved the poetry, stunning photographs and Richie Haven's "Here Comes the Sun." Whenever I hear that song it always makes me feel happy and optimistic.

      How cool that you've had the pleasure of hearing him perform it in person and enjoying a nature festival with him.

      Voted up across the board except for funny.

    • bravewarrior profile imageAUTHOR

      Shauna L Bowling 

      5 years ago from Central Florida

      Glad you enjoyed it Gypsy!

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      Gypsy Rose Lee 

      5 years ago from Riga, Latvia

      Voted up and awesome. Great tribute to nature. Loved the video. Passing this on.

    • bravewarrior profile imageAUTHOR

      Shauna L Bowling 

      5 years ago from Central Florida

      I'll have to tell you someday how I shared nature with Richie Havens! True story! (not dirty, don't worry!)

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      Maria Jordan 

      5 years ago from Jeffersonville PA

      "HERE COMES THE SHA..."

      Girl, that video made me feel like I was on... oh never mind, LOVED it and love you ever so much more! Voted UP and ABI. Hugs, Maria

    • bravewarrior profile imageAUTHOR

      Shauna L Bowling 

      5 years ago from Central Florida

      I appreciate your comment securityproducts3. I don't know if you're aware, but HP brings your pen name up as spam. You might want to modify it so you don't get disregarded.

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      Shauna L Bowling 

      5 years ago from Central Florida

      Breathe her in, TT and regain perspective. You don't know how many times I close my eyes, spread my arms and lift my face to the sun until I feel the warmth penetrate my body. It burns out the negative and gives me new life.

      Thank you for your thoughts. BTW, I just read your interview. Loved it! It's always nice to get to know the people we gain as acquaintances. That's how we become comrades!

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      Terrye Toombs 

      5 years ago from Somewhere between Heaven and Hell without a road map.

      I think you captured the essence of basking in the warmth of the sun very well! Good job, brave! :) I feel warmer already! :)

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      securityproducts3 

      5 years ago

      "All seems to be celebrating Life." - Beautiful! Really great poem

    • bravewarrior profile imageAUTHOR

      Shauna L Bowling 

      5 years ago from Central Florida

      Thank you, Shara. I'm glad you enjoy the beauty of nature. She's marvelous!

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      Farhat 

      5 years ago from Delhi

      what a celebration...even the nature enjoying on the whole!...congrats bravewarrior!

    • bravewarrior profile imageAUTHOR

      Shauna L Bowling 

      5 years ago from Central Florida

      My arms are wide open, Simba! Welcome!

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      Jon 

      5 years ago from UK

      It will be a pleasure to get to know Bravewarrior

    • bravewarrior profile imageAUTHOR

      Shauna L Bowling 

      5 years ago from Central Florida

      Whoo hoo! I done good! Thank you Simba and thank you for the follow. I need to get to know you and how you came to be where you are now!

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      Jon 

      5 years ago from UK

      Awesome write my friend and the video is mint !!!

      Cheered me right up thanks

      Simba

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