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Before you leave me ------the poem

Updated on February 19, 2014
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Silent

Trace of a smile

To invite me to the depth of enigma,

Patent

Crave of a soul

To ignite me to the depth of charisma.

A smile to lure….

Some words to cure…..

And a path so forbidden…

Then I walked with all my senses…

To be lured till hypnotized by those eyes….

And a steep swing of a mind….

Charmed till a fire burnt my being….till the end…

I have fallen to the graveyard of a memory unheard….

Then I breathed in some freezing warmth of sense…

With ongoing wave of…pretense so lone

Again naked branches of a heart bedridden….

And once upon a time ….

There was a life…

To feel….

and to heal….!!!!!

A sun is there for me to shine…

And a sky gets lost in the horizon far away…..

Then I just drank a cup full of fire…..

It is slowly rowing down my throat…..

I can feel me burning till the last knot ….

And slowly I am eying a Sun to be dead….

A night never to be a day…..

Before you leave me……

Cover my ashes with drape of a dark sky

Without the traces of twinkling suns….!!!!

Racoon - Before you leave. [With Lyrics]

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    • dghbrh profile imageAUTHOR

      deergha 

      4 years ago from ...... a place beyond now and beyond here !!!

      Deb...many thanks for your wonderful words here....hope u have enjoyed a nice weekend. God bless you and I am sure enjoying and liking your awesome grin here.

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      Deb Hirt 

      4 years ago from Stillwater, OK

      deergha, the heart grows fonder no matter in what hue--

      for the charismatic soul smiles its lusty hue

      before dawn touches down

      (grin)

    • dghbrh profile imageAUTHOR

      deergha 

      4 years ago from ...... a place beyond now and beyond here !!!

      Jackie Lennley....Glad that you have liked this one.

      R Q....wowww its so nice to receive your comment here.....contradictions are there in life thus its expressed here......If we living then there is always contradictions though we may not hope and try for but it is still and always there. Hope you enjoy your weekend as well.....Thanks for your kind word here, time you have given to go through this one...votes and shares everything.

      God bless you always

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      Romeos Quill 

      4 years ago from Lincolnshire, England

      Your verses are becoming more coherent Deergha; I remember your extremely flattering private mails which you said greatly helped you with your English and am proud that you are finding expression with such verve.Even though it was sad, it was beautifully written, though some of the contradictions I didn't understand, but keep going :)

      I sure hope this is just poetry and not real life.

      Thank you, and sending kind regards for a peaceful weekend.

      Voting up and sharing.

      Sincerely,

      R.Q.

    • Romeos Quill profile image

      Romeos Quill 

      4 years ago from Lincolnshire, England

      You're verses are becoming more coherent Deergha; I remember your extremely flattering private mails which you said greatly helped you with your English and am proud that you are finding expression with such verve.Even though it was sad, it was beautifully written, though some of the contradictions I didn't understand, but keep going :)

      I sure hope this is just poetry and not real life.

      Thank you, and sending kind regards for a peaceful weekend.

      Voting up and sharing.

      Sincerely,

      R.Q.

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      Jackie Lynnley 

      4 years ago from The Beautiful South

      Very beautiful and awesome; up and sharing.

    • dghbrh profile imageAUTHOR

      deergha 

      4 years ago from ...... a place beyond now and beyond here !!!

      Thanks to Vellur...for your words here..glad that you liked it.

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      Nithya Venkat 

      4 years ago from Dubai

      Great poem with vivid imagery.

    • dghbrh profile imageAUTHOR

      deergha 

      4 years ago from ...... a place beyond now and beyond here !!!

      Faith

      Phyllis Doyle

      many thanks for both your ever encouraging words. God bless always

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      Phyllis Doyle Burns 

      4 years ago from High desert of Nevada.

      Beautiful poem full of emotions and memories of a love lost. The song is very well chosen. Well done.

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      Faith Reaper 

      4 years ago from southern USA

      Superb poetry as always, dramatic and beautiful!

      Up and more and sharing

      Hugs,

      Faith Reaper

    • dghbrh profile imageAUTHOR

      deergha 

      4 years ago from ...... a place beyond now and beyond here !!!

      DDE

      ChitrangadaSharan

      Many thanks for your ever encouraging comments ..glad that you have liked it. Thank you once again. God bless

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      Chitrangada Sharan 

      4 years ago from New Delhi, India

      How beautiful and touching! Well done!

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      Devika Primić 

      4 years ago from Dubrovnik, Croatia

      Great writing here on this beautiful poem with the many emotions

    • dghbrh profile imageAUTHOR

      deergha 

      4 years ago from ...... a place beyond now and beyond here !!!

      Many thanks:-)

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      sujaya venkatesh 

      4 years ago

      on a touching note dg

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