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Betrayed by your sweet lies

Updated on January 12, 2013

To all girls who are betrayed by guys.

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No rhythm,no love

I am floating above

I am dead,

actually

unable to make a voice

Or a complaint

Or even push him off

The die is cast

they say

The pens have been lifted

and the ink have dried

No where to turn

when your mind dragged so easily to sweet lies

and soul quickly tarred by the first love

What should I do?

What should I say?

Do words could turn me back where it started

so I could make a change?

Is there any way out the siege to breath some fresh air

and crawl somewhere?

Surrender

Show no fear

No pain

Enjoy

A little nattering voice keeps insisting.

An other from within the further deep

belches out :

Take the body

Bum off the road.

You’re nothing but a dirty man

You were supposed to protect me

But you only failed at that

How could you stand upright and bear looking in my eyes

after this coercion?

I know -I am still reminiscing-"What a dumb fool I was!"

But I knew it was some sort of elaborate plan

I was a weak prey

easy mark

You approached me so gently

like a wolf in sheep's clothes

Sweetly talking to me

like singing a song

I felt like I had known you forever

telling you my secrets,

my eccentrics

my frailties

After the final crush,you will get off glowing

taking bath,

cleaning

and then walk away.

But for me,I will be stained here forever

covering my head in shame,

mourning my luck

Like a ragdoll left outside in the rain,

I will cry for little more than

a shard of pity.


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      Surabhi Kaura 23 months ago

      Ah - deeply felt!

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      Tijani Achamlal 23 months ago from Morocco

      Missy Smith

      Thanks so much for your nice words.

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      Missy Smith 23 months ago from Florida

      A really deep poem of truth. It reads exactly how real life situations play out. Nice work with words James! :)

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      Tijani Achamlal 4 years ago from Morocco

      dreamseeker2,

      Thanks for dropping by and commented.I really appreciate that.Have a wonderful weekend!

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      dreamseeker2 4 years ago

      Powerful poem, full of honest and felt emotion. Voted it up and awesome, as it held so much meaning behind each word that was chosen to paint us the sad, yet often so true image. : ) Good job! Heart felt!

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      Tijani Achamlal 4 years ago from Morocco

      Kim ,

      Your input really boosts my confidence .Thanks so much!

      Have a wonderful time there!

      James

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      ocfireflies 4 years ago from North Carolina

      Such insight. Nicely done. I read it several times and each time, the impact of the meaning was stronger than the last.

      Best Always,

      Kim

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      Tijani Achamlal 4 years ago from Morocco

      PHILLYDREAMER,

      Yes my friend.I agree with you. Words can be twisted into any shape. Promises can be made to lull the heart and seduce the soul. In the final analysis, words mean nothing. Love not translated into action is not love,just a word like stone,chair,wall,..no soul and not worth dying for.

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      Jose Velasquez 4 years ago from Lodi, New Jersey

      People often fall in love with the idea of love and as long as a person fits within that idea that person can feel pretty loved, but as soon as he or she goes against the idea, the illusion is shattered. My advice never believe the words I Love You until the person saying them has seen you at your worst.

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      Tijani Achamlal 4 years ago from Morocco

      @Livingsta,Thanks so much for stopping by and commented.I will follow you poems too.

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      livingsta 4 years ago from United Kingdom

      So beautifully written, exactly how a girl would feel during those times. I have no more words! Voted up and sharing!

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      Tijani Achamlal 4 years ago from Morocco

      I just sent msg to the staff,explaining them my problem.I am still waiting their answer.Is it able to transfer my hubs from here to an other hub account?

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      Deborah Brooks Langford 4 years ago from Brownsville,TX

      Okay James I understand. Blessing

      Debbie

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      Tijani Achamlal 4 years ago from Morocco

      So it was you then hehe:)Wow ,You are everywhere lol You are the first person who saw my real picture :)Well,sorry I will not write any poem till I fix my technical problem here.I forgot the password of my hubpage email(hotmail) and my answers to security questions.I dunno what to do ?:(

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      Deborah Brooks Langford 4 years ago from Brownsville,TX

      James i love your love poems. Will you write another one?

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      Deborah Brooks Langford 4 years ago from Brownsville,TX

      Hi james so good to see you on

      Wizzley. Love your picture

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      acaetnna 4 years ago from Guildford

      What an incredible poem, so full of emotion and total understanding of how a woman would feel.

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      Tijani Achamlal 4 years ago from Morocco

      @ Blondey,Thanks ,I will read it ;)

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      Rosemary Amrhein 4 years ago from Boston, MA

      hey james, sorry I couldn't find the poem of mine we were chatting on, or was it yours? anyways,this is the one I was talking about https://hubpages.com/literature/can-you-find-me-a-...

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      Tijani Achamlal 4 years ago from Morocco

      @ImKarn23,Just every women I speak of.They are easily betrayed by men.I stand in solidarity with them.Thanks for the votes. Here,I would like to say that any woman cant be herself in the society of the present day, which is an exclusively masculine society, with laws framed by men and with a judicial system that judges feminine conduct from a masculine point of view.She is always a victim and oppressed by men.

      Many Blessings.

      James.

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      Karen Silverman 4 years ago

      Oh, baby - somebody knows the heart of a woman!

      The pain, the helplessness - Not sure if this is a woman you know that you speak of - or...EVERY WOMAN!

      How does it go - best to have loved and lost?

      Maybe...maybe not, eh...

      Incredibly poetry, my friend - up and sharing..

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      Tijani Achamlal 4 years ago from Morocco

      @lady E,They learn so quickly from mistakes and bad experiences unlike guys.After the recovery,They become impenetrable and hard to crack.

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      Tijani Achamlal 4 years ago from Morocco

      @ Deborah Brooks.Thanks for following my creativity.Yes,It s so sad to see guys only think about how to get there and then walk away as simple as that .That s a sign of bad times.

      Many Blessings.

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      Eiddwen 4 years ago from Wales

      A wonderful tender and precious poem James.

      I vote up,across and share around.

      Have a great day.

      Eddy.

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      Elena 4 years ago from London, UK

      Very touching to read. Many women experience this as they are tender hearted and quick to trust. However, somehow they become a stronger and more confident person as time heals.

      I like the way you wrote it.

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      Deborah Brooks Langford 4 years ago from Brownsville,TX

      James.. Your have a wonderful heart. its like you know how a woman thinks.. this is simply amazing writing.. touches something deep inside me.. thank you for writing this.. I feel like you wrote it to me.

      many blessings to you

      I am sharing this masterpiece.

      Debbie

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      Tijani Achamlal 4 years ago from Morocco

      Thanks my friend.I appreciate so much your comment.

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      cleaner3 4 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      great emotional poem , my friend.