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Between a scream and a stare

Updated on October 6, 2011

Gift wrapped and tied up

pretty for you

unfetter me

you may see the truth

im many things

that you cant see at all

take a look at me cowboy

im not your china doll

cut to the scene

im dusty as hell

high heel on a suitcase

leg out for the sell

thumb in the air

first truck and im gone

not sure if you care

in fact im sure you don't

but im bending to break

to get out of this jail

to not be called baby

id shed my own shell


its when...

its when im alone

and you're somewhere

in a drunken drone

you can't tell me

with my hands in my hair

somewhere in between

a scream and a stare

that you are something..........im going to bear

that's why...

i've just got to go.

pack up my love and

you can keep the panty hose

i've just...

got to get out of this place

its no longer an option

now its a race.

Fork over my heart

from your dinner plate

i've got my life waiting

i don't want to be late

boots on the porch

its the sweetest sound

that ive heard in a long one

and im not turning round

because....

This time


........................I am leaving


...........................................................without

..............................................................................you

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    • epigramman profile image

      epigramman 5 years ago

      ......quite simply my inky other half you are doing the best writing of your life .....and I am stunned by your creative output ...... it's just hubsmashing!!!!!!!

      lake erie time 2:40am hold on hold on I'll send you another card.....

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      seicheprey 5 years ago

      I must agree with the epigramman, Pink, keep it up.:)

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      Manoj Kumar Srivastava 5 years ago from India

      the pink umbrella,

      What a poetic protest, I'm impressed.

      Lots ofLove,

      MAKUSR

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      tnderhrt23 5 years ago

      Wow! Potent and compelling! A great read! Voted up!

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      poetvix 5 years ago from Gone from Texas but still in the south. Surrounded by God's country.

      You go girl! This is up in your face, keep it real kind of hubtastic!

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      Mamadrama 5 years ago from Upstate NY

      take a look at me cowboy

      im not your china doll

      cut to the scene

      im dusty as hell

      high heel on a suitcase

      leg out for the sell

      HOT DAMN GIRL!!! Love isn't even the word for this one.. Fantastic!!

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      the pink umbrella 5 years ago from the darkened forest deep within me.

      lol, thanks mamadrama, i felt weird putting this up because it flowed out of me, but when i read it back it didnt sound like me. i guess im just used to being sure of my work lol.

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      sligobay 5 years ago from east of the equator

      "These boots are made for walking..." and that's just what I'll do comes to mind with this read. Great write Pink'Um.

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      the pink umbrella 5 years ago from the darkened forest deep within me.

      thanks slingobay!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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      JadedLove 5 years ago

      More than awesome. Up and very very lovely.

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      Dallas W Thompson 5 years ago from Bakersfield, CA

      One must be true to one's self! Great read. Awesome and flag up!

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      the pink umbrella 5 years ago from the darkened forest deep within me.

      thanks guys, special thanks to you jaded, your comments are always appreciated

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      JadedLove 5 years ago

      in a heart you have shown me i feel i know you a little more than most. you truly are a blessing.

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      Nikkij504gurl 5 years ago from Louisiana

      Awesome!! Hell Yea! "Take a look at me cowboy, I'm not your china doll." Loved that line.

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      the pink umbrella 5 years ago from the darkened forest deep within me.

      thank you jaded, i feel we may have known each other once.

      lol nikki hell yea!

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      Vinaya Ghimire 5 years ago from Nepal

      I loved the easy flow of emotions, beautiful expressions and interesting pictures.

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      Jennuhlee 5 years ago from Pennsylvania

      Wow such GREAT work here, wonderful imagery, such beautiful structure, it's truly flawless.

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      the pink umbrella 5 years ago from the darkened forest deep within me.

      wow, that means alot comming from you after reading some of your work. i think you are amazingly talented. i love hub hopping, because i get to randomly find awesome writers like you. i have to say though, i havnt found work while hopping lately that i like quite as much as yours, so lucky me tonight!

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      StricktlyDating 5 years ago from Australia

      Love it, really cool!

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