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Black Grooves

Updated on July 20, 2011

Black and white defines the lines

That wrap around like vines

Hemorrhaged wells of ink

That connects in every way and link


Would it be documented history?

Even though it may not be my story

But in a way be her story

Or would it be blank like a mystery


There are no wrongs or rights in this

Or it can badly go amiss

Taken from a graphic technique

A delineation of form so unique


Essential features without details

Given exact on a shade of grey scale

A rough draft to what it may be

Subsequent elaboration for you to see


bellawritter23(copyright)2011

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      Binaya.Ghimire 5 years ago

      Tantalizing!

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      Erica Sanchez 5 years ago from California

      Binaya, thanks pal!! :)

      bella

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      Carolee Samuda 5 years ago from Jamaica

      You rock my dear sista Bella. I love the sensations of mystery evoked here.

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      Erica Sanchez 5 years ago from California

      Car, Thanks Mz. I felt a bit unclear today lol ;)

      bella

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      Erin Bower 5 years ago from Georgia

      This displays wonderful word choices. I voted this up and beautiful!

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      January Moon 5 years ago from NY, Now Living in Atlanta Ga

      Cool Poem!

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      Poetic Fool 5 years ago

      Bella, lovely wordcraft here that leaves you wondering ... wanting more. Voted up and awesome.

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      Tankadin 5 years ago

      Enjoy reading your very interesting words!

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      september girl 5 years ago

      Artistic, is what I see in your writing. : ) Thought provoking too.

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      samiaali 5 years ago

      Very nice Bellawritter23! I liked it very much. :)

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      5 years ago from East Coast Canada

      Leaving a lot to the imagination.... I like that.. stories unfold and unfurl... like our own histories! Nicely formed!

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      Nikkij504gurl 5 years ago from Louisiana

      artzy fartzy lol that drawing is pretty spectacular. and I like the poem too, great way to describe writing!

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