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Blinded Breath

Updated on September 10, 2012

I cant break free from your lies, fueling my cries and insecurities.

Lay to rest, all the past regrets, fade away memories that are haunting me.

Invading peace, overthrowing my dreams.

Take a deep breath,

take it all in.

Breathe deep for a little while.

Take a breath moving slowly in.

In one breath, choking on all your sins.

You are beautiful in our insanity,

you were once everything to me.

But our path was torn a new way reborn.

One side for me, I follow spitefully.

You stumble along your way treading, lightly.

Our minds once binded, our tongues were poetic minded.

Look in so i can see your sin.

Crawling in your own skin.

Love is what you were claiming.

But you were just jumping in blindly.

Breathe in ever so fucking slightly,

Let go the fear your hiding.


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    • BeyondMax profile image

      BeyondMax 5 years ago from Sydney, Australia

      Intense and emotional but oh, how so beautiful! Cool!

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      cleaner3 5 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      I like the way you write and i have seen some of the older stuff. keep it up

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      brittney 5 years ago from lost in my own minds lines

      Thank you cleaner for takingthe time to read some of my work.... Check outsomeofmy older poetry its more in a form you would like to see

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      cleaner3 5 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      You don't have pain you have rage, and I like how you express it. very powerful. would like it better if you break it down. Good write.

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      brittney 6 years ago from lost in my own minds lines

      thank you so much i hate the pain from relationships gone bad but without the pain there would be no fuel for the fire that ignites my writing

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      rasw 6 years ago

      Nice, very nice. so relateable.