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Bloodlines-3

Updated on March 22, 2016

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The human female was tougher then he thought,
she battled as if victory is what she sought,
the vampire smiled at her,
as she was erasing the lines of pain away from her face,
He pulled at her, and she fought back,
thwarting blows, and offering a formidable attack.
The vampire couldn’t understand her need to win,
the other humans coward, and ran away,
she battled with grace and was here to stay,
this just didn’t seem right,
but she continued and she put up such a fight.
She managed to move along side a massive trunk of one fallen tree,
raising her weapon upward so the vampire couldn’t see,
he turned to face her and she stood tall,
a crushing blow that made him fall, and sway,
crawl, and pray,
as he tried to sneak away,
the sword came down and ate away at his flesh,
and his screaming instincts were actually dead wrong,
he was in darkness, and he heard the haunting song,
but before the female ended his life,
he saw a child covered in the forest mud secretly hidden away,
and the female watched his pain turn into a twisted disarray
now he understood the reason for his defeat,
she was a mother with a child to protect,
and he was a vampire that had a chance to select,
a weakling, a coward any other,
instead he chose to fight against the power of a mother.



© 2012 Frank Atanacio

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      Frank Atanacio 3 years ago from Shelton

      thank you my lady :)

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      Joanna Chandler 3 years ago from On planet Earth

      Frank THIS WAS fan bloody tastic !!! AWESOME it went very very well. I must share this , i really enjoyed and love every line it rhymed .

      This lady is my kind of woman, one who don't backs down but laid the axe right through his crown and made him fall down ha ha ha.

      Keep up the good work :)

      `~~God bless U and your family~~`

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      Frank Atanacio 5 years ago from Shelton

      thanks so much flashpoint :) Frank

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      Frank Atanacio 5 years ago from Shelton

      thanks so much flashpoint :) Frank

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      femmeflashpoint 5 years ago

      Frank,

      I noticed your coment to Sueswan, stating you thought you'd try something different.

      It worked. I liked it. A lot!

      femme

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      Frank Atanacio 5 years ago from Shelton

      LOL.. thought I'd try something different LOL thanks for reading my bloodlines Sueswan

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      Sueswan 5 years ago

      Hi Frank

      Foolish Vampire! lol

      Voted up and away

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      Frank Atanacio 5 years ago from Shelton

      thanks for reading my bloodlines express10 and Susan are you trying to say my victims dont win LOL im kidding thanks for the visit :) Frank

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      Susan Zutautas 5 years ago from Ontario, Canada

      A mother will do anything to protect her child. I love this one as the victim finally won! Great job Frank!

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      H C Palting 5 years ago from East Coast

      Great example of why you shouldn't mess with a momma bear! Your poems are always great Frank.

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      Frank Atanacio 5 years ago from Shelton

      time2rite your the best.. and I believe you :) LOL

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      time2rite 5 years ago from Navarre, Fl, USA

      Awesome, Frank; no one DARES come between a mother and her child/children! I have grown sons, but I would fight to the death for them still. Gory-good read!

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      Frank Atanacio 5 years ago from Shelton

      LOL silly :) Thanks for reading

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      Lissette 5 years ago from Central Florida

      This was awesome. I am jumping around in my pj's cheering for Mom's!

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      Frank Atanacio 5 years ago from Shelton

      thanks the lyricwriter for reading my bloodlines :) Frank

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      Richard Ricky Hale 5 years ago from West Virginia

      Up, awesome, and interesting votes Frank. Great poem all the way through pal. I am reading it through and all is mild violence, then all hell breaks loose. Detail is great. The power of a mother knowns no bounds.

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      Frank Atanacio 5 years ago from Shelton

      Thank you so much Our Ms Brooks Im so glad you liked it.. and shim-dawn thanks for your continued support :) Bless you both

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      shimmering Dawn 5 years ago

      Wow! A mom is always a tigress and guards her own... I know the feeling ... Love this one!

      Have a blessed day. Peace!

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      Deborah Brooks Langford 5 years ago from Brownsville,TX

      wow Frank.. You expressed the love of mothers. and then the killing of the vampire.. saving her child.. I love it..

      Love your poems..'

      voted way up

      Debbie

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      Frank Atanacio 5 years ago from Shelton

      Writer20 thank you so much for commenting...you are the best :) Frank

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      Frank Atanacio 5 years ago from Shelton

      thanks Sky and Phoebe I know you will be successful too LOL :) thanks for checking out my bloodlines

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      Joyce Haragsim 5 years ago from Southern Nevada

      This a powerful poem. Voted up and amazing,your friend Joyce.

      Were do you find these poems? Your always write so well.

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      Phoebe Pike 5 years ago

      Beautifully written. I know I would fight anything and anyone if they came near my son. I don't know if I would be successful, but I would try my hardest.

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      Sky9106 5 years ago from A beautiful place on earth.

      There goes the powere of a mother, there is nothing a mother will not do for her child , and there come brethren Frank with an aching scenario, showing a mothers love.

      Great depiction of a mothers love . Life and death will always be the ultimate measure in the eyes of man, but there is so many more steps.

      Bless brethren.