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Blueprints (tanka)

Updated on February 11, 2013

Where do we wander

When sleep kisses us goodnight

And soft gates appear

Into the lands of our dreams

Or blueprints of tomorrow


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      Faith Reaper 4 years ago from southern USA

      Oh, now this is oh so beautiful!!! Love it very much!

      Voted up ++++ and sharing

      God bless. In His Love, Faith Reaper

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      Bill Holland 4 years ago from Olympia, WA

      A glimpse of the next life? So much in so few words...well done!

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      Jim Higgins 4 years ago from Eugene, Oregon

      Beautiful poem Martin!

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      travmaj 4 years ago from australia

      I agree - I love your tanka - one beautiful poem.

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      Jools99 4 years ago from North-East UK

      Succinct and beautiful - blueprints for life's plans.

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      Jo Alexis-Hagues 4 years ago from Bedfordshire, U.K

      To the land of dreams where everything is possible..... Beautifully done.

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      Deb Hirt 4 years ago from Stillwater, OK

      Wonderful. I love the thought.

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      Catherine Tally 4 years ago from Los Angeles

      Very nice!

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      Lillian K. Staats 4 years ago from Wasilla, Alaska

      THIS IS SEMINAL! There you are sweetie! Look at you! All growed up! I love this ephemeral, dreaming quality to the piece! Excellent! Love yaz, lily

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      Nithya Venkat 4 years ago from Dubai

      Blueprints of tomorrow, I like that. Another awesome poem.

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      deergha 4 years ago from ...... a place beyond now and beyond here !!!

      So much said in such short and sweet way. Many thanks for this one. Shares and votes ++++++

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      Gypsy Rose Lee 4 years ago from Riga, Latvia

      Voted up and awesome. This was so wonderful.

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      Ruby Jean Fuller 4 years ago from Southern Illinois

      Another one of your masterpieces! Loved it...

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      Quotes Lover 4 years ago

      I'ts simply beautiful poem

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      Karen Silverman 4 years ago've got my wondering now..

      something different today, M!

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