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Bottle of feeling -a Haiku

Updated on August 4, 2012
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Bottle full of blinking feeling

Flower yet to bloom for bottle necked

Bottle got drunk for evening.

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      Deborah Brooks Langford 4 years ago from Brownsville,TX

      wow I love this Haiku.. outstanding

      nice to meet you.. I will share on facebook..

      I am deborah Brooks langford on facebook

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      Martin Kloess 4 years ago from San Francisco

      This is so good I have one for you

      When the flame had gone

      We searched across empty fields

      Sadly wandering

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      deergha 4 years ago from ...... a place beyond now and beyond here !!!

      Thank you Debbie...for your first visit in my poem....its wonderful to receive a comment from a poet of your caliber....your comment is much appreciated here. I am not in Facebook but i shall mail you sure as I would be greatful to have a friend like you if you prefer so. Read your new poem...its wonderful.

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      Thank you@Mhatter for your kind visit and words here, and yes....its always a pleasure to read your writings.

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      IAmForbidden 4 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up.

      Deergha, this one is amazing! ..Flower yet to bloom is a fantastic line.

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      deergha 4 years ago from ...... a place beyond now and beyond here !!!

      Thank you@Spy for you liking it......much appreciation for your visit here.

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      Angelme566 4 years ago

      beautiful . love this ! Voted Up !

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      deergha 4 years ago from ...... a place beyond now and beyond here !!!

      Thanks @Angelme......for your kind visit, comment and vote:-)

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      Faith Reaper 4 years ago from southern USA

      Very clever, interesting and lovely. In His Love, Faith Reaper

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      deergha 4 years ago from ...... a place beyond now and beyond here !!!

      Thank you @ Faith Reaper for your kind words.

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      Gypsy Rose Lee 4 years ago from Riga, Latvia

      Clever and fantastic. Voted up.

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      Cynthia B Turner 4 years ago from Georgia

      Different. Nicely done.

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      snowdrops 4 years ago from The Second Star to the Right

      Hello Deergha. I loooove your haiku, simply beautiful!

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      deergha 4 years ago from ...... a place beyond now and beyond here !!!

      Thank you @ Gypsy, Cyndi10, snowdrops .....for your precious words here and kind visit.

      Its much appreciated.

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      Olde Cashmere 4 years ago from Michigan, United States

      Wonderful Haiku dghbrh, perfectly fitted with this style. Voted up, awesome, and beautiful :)

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      deergha 4 years ago from ...... a place beyond now and beyond here !!!

      Thank you @Olde Cashmere for your precious visit and comment here......and votes also.

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