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Updated on April 3, 2012


Some days its true that I could use
some brainwashing techniques
perhaps some Mr. Bubble
would give my brain a tweak...

A glowy little candle and
a little glass of wine
while I soak away my grimy brain
in a steamy bath divine.

Yes, brainwashing is just the thing
and I know more than one
who could use this little torment
that would beat the old dry run!



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      No_Clue 5 years ago

      Thanx, Max! I so appreciate you!

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      BeyondMax 5 years ago from Sydney, Australia

      LOL how creative! Excellent poem, love the wordplay! =)

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      No_Clue 6 years ago

      Nite Nite, star! Thanks for stopping by for a gander! Sleep tight you! Hugs!

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      Annette Donaldson 6 years ago from Northern Ireland

      steamy bath divine, that sounds good to me. Well written little ditty. Now my work is done I am off the beddy byes, just wish I had a teddy for company, the toy boy is working agaaaain lol

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      No_Clue 6 years ago

      miss_jkim, thank you! This was a fun write...and my brain needs washing periodically!

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      miss_jkim 6 years ago

      Adorable set of quatrains. My favorite is the glow of candles and the glass of wine, a soothing method of brain washing.

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      No_Clue 6 years ago

      sofs, thank you! I so appreciate your comment!

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      sofs 6 years ago

      Simply cute...I couldn't find another word for it :)

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      No_Clue 6 years ago

      attemptedhumour, great comment! Made me smile! Cheers to you, too!

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      attemptedhumour 6 years ago from Australia

      These challenges are good, as it forces something out that would otherwise lie dormant. Well done. I put the garden hose in my right ear whilst i'm watering the left side of the garden and kill two birds with one stone. Not the rolling stone of course as he's busy with the rambling Rose. Cheers.

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      No_Clue 6 years ago

      Thank you, Hattie, Mr. Bubbles for sure! are welcome! Great challenge!

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      MysteriousOne 6 years ago

      LOL.....can't stop laughing!! Excellent piece of work!

      Thank you!

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      HattieMattieMae 6 years ago from Limburg, Netherlands

      hmm, I don't know about the brain washing, but always loved Mr. Bubbles bath's. lol

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      No_Clue 6 years ago

      This is dedicated to MysteriousOne who challenged me to write a little piece about "brainwashing"...take that!