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Breakup Relationship

Updated on August 9, 2011

Close my eyes…
Feeling burned...
Fist gripping...
Heart aching…

Soul melting
Hope dying
Tears shedding
In denial…

Love break into pieces
Marriage ring came off
Court paper file divorce

Men drinking getting drunk
Woman in room sleeping without eating

Heart aching both side…
Both cried a silent cry…

Depression…

Head start to ache
Stress could not sleep
Pain tighten chest…
Life is worthless…

Wife ripping pictures out
Husband go to club and hang out…
Getting drunk with friends…
Wife dying in her bed..

Silently alone
Both have pain…
Due to a fight leads to divorce…

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      chanroth 5 years ago from California, USA

      Hello ishwaryaa22 and time2rite, thank you! time2rite, I'm sorry you begun this journey, I wish you all the best! :)

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      time2rite 5 years ago from Navarre, Fl, USA

      You have captured so well the pain of divorce. I have begun this journey myself, and it is indeed like a death: of hopes, dreams, and even of self. Thank you so much for sharing!

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      Ishwaryaa Dhandapani 5 years ago from Chennai, India

      Well-written poetry! Your poem Exactly reflected the feelings of couple who headed for divorce! Awesome Hub! Vote up.

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      chanroth 6 years ago from California, USA

      Hi Dinesh, haha...good one...nice joke. I'm glad that I brought you a morning smile. May all your day be a bless. :)

      chanroth

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      VENZKHVAM 6 years ago from Milk way galaxy, trying to find a more adventurous place in another galaxy with my great followers

      Hi Miss Chanroth,

      Thanks for the morning smile and also for being my friend forever.But on a lighter note you have to be my girlfriend becoz technically you are a girl and my nice friend. so you have to be my girl friend and not boy friend. jokes apart thanks for your friendship and wish you lots of happiness and success for you always. and count one me when ever you need this friend

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      chanroth 6 years ago from California, USA

      Hi Brother Anip! Thanks for commenting and stopping by! Buddha Bless! :) *I hope you pass your exam!*

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      Anip Barua 6 years ago

      From this poem people can learn about the objective of esteem of heart each other which has invisible electrical circumstance in it. so all the sentient being can be aware of falling in critical loving process so on. life is momentary so what we have for perpetuating, have to have search from it cause whenever nothing then there we can find everything. there is not ward as impossible. So the objective which can make us alas, have to give it up as soon as quick and think about it.

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      chanroth 6 years ago from California, USA

      Hi professionalhub, you are right. It is painful! It's always a nightmare for some people. Thanks. :)

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      professionalhub 6 years ago from Pakistan

      Breaking up is always painful

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      chanroth 6 years ago from California, USA

      Hi Dinesh, I'm sorry about what have happen to you between you and your spouse. I know that it takes time to heal especially going through separation. But you always have a friend to lean on whenever you are in need to express your feeling. I have never been through separation with my fiance before but I know that I would feel exactly like what I wrote in the poem if I did went through separation with him. When I write this poem, I started to put my shoe in their shoe and asked myself how would I feel going through this. Everything comes in imagination, deep imagination and you'll feel the pain. After reading the comment you post above, brings me a morning smile. Even though I cannot be your girlfriend, but I can always be your friend! :)

      ~Chanroth~

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      VENZKHVAM 6 years ago from Milk way galaxy, trying to find a more adventurous place in another galaxy with my great followers

      I think iam connected with you some where in this or last life and wish i would have been your boy friend since you would have understood me very well a poet can only understand a grieving mind.your poems or nothing but my life experience. in spite of my separation i luv her like any thing and i cannot hate her even though she still now never ever understands me.i luv you chanroth

      YOURS LOVINGLY DINESH NAIR

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      chanroth 6 years ago from California, USA

      Hi anupma, you are right, it is the biggest trauma of life. Thank you! :)

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      Dr Anupma Srivastava 6 years ago from India

      Divorce is the biggest trauma of life. Your poem explains very well after separation what happens really. Heartouching lines. Anyone can understand the pain your lines so lively.