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Updated on May 2, 2010

Rain drenched darkness fills their hearts

With others razors In their hands.

They're In there now writing lasting letters.

With pictures of old times In far sight.

Lightning covered darkness In there eyes

With others razors In their veins and

Their letters are In their final place and everything Is

Neatly tucked away ..

Memories begin flashing through

Their pain induced minds suffering…

They're now pacing through their selfishly escaping time..

They lay down methodically and then just simply die…

With others razors on their floors..

They're now laying In those pools..

Wind enhanced darkness fills their sky’s

And In that moment their demons begin to cry

While their angels only let out their simplest sighs..

The dirtiest skeletal hands now waving at them ..

The flames O ! The flames they feel!!!

The Screams O ! those screams how they hear!!!

The pain now O ! No O How now It Is eternally theirs!

Brightest Nights-


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      8 years ago from A Bed of Roses

      Interesting!Very revealing !

    • Awful Poet profile imageAUTHOR

      David Walston 

      8 years ago from The Large Magellanic Cloud (LMC) (m-M)_0 = 18.41, or 48 kpc (~157,000

      Am And Will Kimberly!

      And poetlarraine Than You

      For Stoping By Stay Awhile

      Get Comfy Its Going To Be

      A Long One

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      8 years ago

      hi nice one, well done...

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      8 years ago

      just checking in seeing if your okay :_)

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      8 years ago

      oh and btw Can you do that thing you do whenever you do, I sure do.

      This piece kicks ass, hows that for etiquette


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      8 years ago

      The flames O ! The flames they feel!!!

      The Screams O ! those screams how they hear!!!

      The pain now O ! No O How now It Is eternally theirs!

      Brightest Nights-

      and They're In there now writing lasting letters.

      grabbed me and won't let go

      the impact of truth

      Truth in emotions/feelings specifically if we allow ourselves

      to be open and see the shadow of it's meaning

      Then we are blessed and if want can learn from

      all the levels of our pain

      that ultimately drive us

      that ultimately makes us larger than life

      scattered remains consist of silence and inner peace

      David, this is just one example of what you offer

      Fly D Fly

      btw just a side note, don't forget your airmiles card

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      8 years ago

      Bravo!! ~hugs~

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      Sapphire Fisher 

      8 years ago

      Loved it very good!

    • Noble Mongoose profile image

      Noble Mongoose 

      8 years ago

      I like the imagery and the power behind the concept.

      I can't figure out whether the mix up of "their, they're, and there" is on purpose or accident. lol


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