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Broken Promises: Broken Heart Haiku Poems

Updated on November 13, 2016
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Jo has been an ITU nurse at the London North West NHS Trust for 14 years. She obtained her RN at University College London Hospital.

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Love Lies Bleeding

A river of tears

Can't wash away the heartache

When love lies bleeding


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Relationship dies

A heart Fatally wounded

Love devoid of trust


Secret rendezvous

Stolen moment's ecstasy-

Lifetime of Regrets

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      Jo Alexis-Hagues 5 years ago from Bedfordshire, U.K

      Rahul, so nice to see you, always an honour. Thank you for the visit and comment.

      All my best wishes to you

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      Jessee R 5 years ago from Gurgaon, India

      The Haikus are brilliant.. the tale you tell is woven with heartbreak and pain..

      Great write my friend.. great write

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      Jo Alexis-Hagues 5 years ago from Bedfordshire, U.K

      Lesley, many thanks, much appreciated.

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      Movie Master 5 years ago from United Kingdom

      Hi tobusiness, fabulous haiku's and I love Leona's song!

      Voting up

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      Jo Alexis-Hagues 5 years ago from Bedfordshire, U.K

      Laurinzo, welcome, and thank you so much for the visit and the beautiful comment. All my best to you.

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      Live To Write 5 years ago from Phoenix, Az.

      After reading your earlier comment I was inspired to read your haiku... one word... Beautiful!

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      Jo Alexis-Hagues 5 years ago from Bedfordshire, U.K

      Hi Max, So glad you liked it, they do say what doesn't kill you... appreciate the visit and comment. all the best.

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      BeyondMax 5 years ago from Sydney, Australia

      Jo, it's amazing! Beautifully portrayed pain and sadness of the broken wings of love...

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      Jo Alexis-Hagues 5 years ago from Bedfordshire, U.K

      Unknown, I am so glad you were touched by this,many thanks for the visit and comment. Have a brilliant day.

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      IAmForbidden 5 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up.

      the first line captured my heart..and until the end. simply so amazing!

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      Jo Alexis-Hagues 5 years ago from Bedfordshire, U.K

      Frank, so glad you liked it, all the best.

      Voronwe, thank you for the wonderful comment, I don't believe Leona received the credit she deserved, but yes I love this song. Hope you're having a wonderful day, all the best.

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      Frank Atanacio 5 years ago from Shelton

      sadly beautiful tobus...

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      Voronwe 5 years ago

      Powerful expressions here! "When love lies bleeding..." Great haiku. The presentation is amazing. The pictures you choose always provide the perfect backdrop. Leona Lewis's Bleeding Love shall always remain a great song!

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      Jo Alexis-Hagues 5 years ago from Bedfordshire, U.K

      Thanks Angel, so thrilled to know you enjoyed it. Have a wonderful day.

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      Angelme566 5 years ago

      This is so beautiful and so true ..not even a million, it's more than that...

      I love haiku and these makes my day ! Voted all ..

      p.s. pics are aweee..

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      Jo Alexis-Hagues 5 years ago from Bedfordshire, U.K

      Angelo52, many thanks fo the visit and comment, have a lovely day.

      Mhatter99, sweet memories indeed, sometime when the tears are falling it is hard to think beyond it. Thank you for the lovely comment and the visit. Best wishes.

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      Martin Kloess 5 years ago from San Francisco

      let each teardrop be

      an everlasting promise

      for sweet memories

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      Angelo52 5 years ago from Central Florida

      Great haikus. A lot of expression for just 17 syllables.

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      Jo Alexis-Hagues 5 years ago from Bedfordshire, U.K

      Dean, welcome and thank you very much for the insightful comment, much appreciated.

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      Dean Traylor 5 years ago from Southern California

      this is a multi-media delight. I love how the words of the haikus interact with the pictures and video presented here. These days you really have to do a lot to get someone's attention. This was successful.

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      Jo Alexis-Hagues 5 years ago from Bedfordshire, U.K

      Ruchira, thank you so much, I'm very happy to know you enjoyed it.

      All my best.

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      Ruchira 5 years ago from United States

      gosh it's heart rendering just to read it and i can imagine what actually goes inside a broken heart.

      well captured via this beautiful haiku.

      voted up indeed and pressed beautiful button

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