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Burning In The Wind-Storms of Desire. A Sonnet by Manatita

Updated on January 13, 2016
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Burning in the wind-storms of desire, my boat sails,

I consume many fishes-- a hurricane of hails!

Recklessly riding the tsunami waves, I rush madly,

Driven by a drunken crave, to appease this scorching sea.



Enslaved by a wind of passionate tornados,

My sail’s on fire, but I do not sense my woes.

Not filled nor conquered, this wanton ageless struggle,

Alas! Alas! This ship begins our huddle.


Down to the lashing waves; the mercilessly pointed rocks,

Still not replenished, by my numerous sen-so-ry stocks.


All would be gone because of shameless goals!

Grace from above has saved my sodden Soul.


Reposed and in the calm of Peace, my Lover’s brought,

The peerless; birthless Source, of my eternal Heart. – Manatita.


The Lantern Carrier. Copyrighted, 11th January, 2016.

~ Awakening The Inner Light ~

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Rabindranath Tagore

© 2016 manatita44

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      Hari Prasad S 16 months ago from Bangalore

      Nice poetry manatita,

      Like a fire neglected,

      I burned, turned,

      brute and blunt,

      With his grace,

      'I' has no trace,

      'I' is at peace.

      - hari

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      Surabhi Kaura 16 months ago

      Well, yea...We all go through this at some point in our lives. For instance, in career, it’s an endless race; rat race. Aaaaah! Rabindra Sangeet – what a delight on this day! Manatita, well done. So much power in your poetry. So much emotion. It’s like sprinkling water on those who are lost between passion and desire. Sometimes we get so much engrossed in time, that it makes it arduous for us to see a big picture. The ticking of clock keeps on moving, but we the people, stay status quo like lost travellers wandering without address. I am so proud of your word-use and the vastness of this poem. It reminds of Shakespeare from the play, Julius Cesar.

      “There is a tide in the affairs of men.

      Which, taken at the flood, leads on to fortune;

      Omitted, all the voyage of their life

      Is bound in shallows and in miseries.

      On such a full sea are we now afloat,

      And we must take the current when it serves,

      Or lose our ventures…” – Shakespeare.

      Again, a fantastic read. Thank you for this. Om Shanti.

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      manatita44 16 months ago

      Nice and interesting approach Hari. Great poem. Thank you.

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      Shaloo Walia 16 months ago

      Sense gratification is the root cause of material existence. A true yogi is the one who controls his senses. It's a long and arduous journey. One who has surrendered to the divine is rescued from the clutches of senses.

      A lovely poem with beautiful use of imagery!

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      Surabhi Kaura 16 months ago

      I like Shaloo's reply here. So true! So true!

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      Bill Holland 16 months ago from Olympia, WA

      Interesting comments to a beautiful piece of writing....desire....hot embers where once there was a roaring blaze. :)

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      Ruby Jean Fuller 16 months ago from Southern Illinois

      Ah the endless burning, desire blowing in the wind. Beautifully penned. I love the pics.

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      manatita44 16 months ago from london

      Ruby,

      I thank you so much! Appreciations.

      Bill, chuckle, chuckle. I like the way you put it. Bro. Cool. Thank you!

      Surabhi,

      I get fed up of losing my comments. Thank you so much. I see that you like Shakespeare, a favourite of mines. As always, your comments are loving and appreciated. Salaam!

      Shaloo, great insight here. Sai bless you. Much Love.

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      Madan 16 months ago from Abu Dhabi

      lovely poem Manatita. What a fertile mind and imagination

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      manatita44 16 months ago from london

      Thank you, Emge. I just twist the mundane a little, then add spice to give it taste. Appreciations.

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      Dora Isaac Weithers 16 months ago from The Caribbean

      Reminds me of song lyrics by Larnelle Harris, "Forever running but losing this race were it not for grace." I share your debt of gratitude to Grace.

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      Rajan Singh Jolly 16 months ago from From Mumbai, presently in Jalandhar,INDIA.

      All the fire of passion and desire can be only doused by His Grace. And then there is complete peace.

      Just beautiful, bro. Om Shanti!

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      Nithya Venkat 16 months ago from Dubai

      Deep thoughts, great write.

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      manatita44 16 months ago from london

      Hi Dee. All's good. Just serving, that is all. Always good to see you and perhaps I should check out Larnelle Harris. Grace, Gratitude and Compassion are supremely significant on Guruji's Path, but again, it's also in our own Christianity. So crucial to inner progress! Thank you so much, my Dear.

      Hi Rajan, you also hit this flower at its core. Thank you so much!

      Hi Vellur, so nice to see you. Much Love and Gratitude.

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      Frank Atanacio 16 months ago from Shelton

      you really do know how to express yourself.. very deep and poetic my friend :)

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      manatita44 16 months ago from london

      Thank you, thank you, my Brother Frank. Much appreciated.

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      MG Singh 16 months ago from Singapore

      Great expression on a common human failing

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      manatita44 16 months ago from london

      MG Singh, I thank you and welcome here. I do appreciate your insight. Much Love.

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      vasantha T k 16 months ago from Bangalore

      lovely poetry! deep thoughts and insights!

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      manatita44 16 months ago from london

      Thank you so much, Vasantha Tk. Appreciated.

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      Deb Hirt 16 months ago from Stillwater, OK

      Both fire and water tend to have those strong effects, which is why it takes one to vanquish the other...

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      manatita44 16 months ago from london

      True. Never thought of it like that, Deb. Good point. Have a great weekend.

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      Gypsy Rose Lee 16 months ago from Riga, Latvia

      Simply awesome poetry.

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      manatita44 16 months ago from london

      Yes, Rasma.

      I've done a couple or so with fire in them. (smile). Have a great weekend!

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      Caroline Marie 16 months ago from Close to Heaven

      Wonderful poetry. :) I love the passion. Very raw. Nice pictures that you used as well.

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      manatita44 16 months ago from london

      Thank you, thank you. I will be working on the book of poetry soon. Really appreciates your kind words.

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      Cynthia B Turner 14 months ago from Georgia

      Beautifully written! It could apply to so many obsessions and passions in life. Well expressed.

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      manatita44 14 months ago from london

      All too true, Cyndiio, yes, yes, so many types of passions and obsessions! (Smiles to you) Have a great day!

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      Gina Welds Hulse 7 months ago from Rockledge, Florida

      How deep and expressive! The calypso song, "Feeling hot, hot, hot!" came to mind as I was reading your poem abounding with beautiful imagery.

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      manatita44 7 months ago from london

      Thank you Gina. Glad you're well. Much Peace.

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