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Burnt in Rain – the poem

Updated on July 28, 2013

Musings of an open sky azure

Sun is a dewy smile to be felt,

Stars cuddle the moon allure

Wind and rain celebrate the zest.

Strips of blacks and whites

Colorful fiesta of mind galore,

Trips of agonies and smiles

Tuneful Celesta to heart’s savor.

Let the this moment crystallize

And the pain is fleeting,

Yet a drop of truth materialize

Since the rain is reeling.

Cloud is expectant metaphor of life

Chains of event unleashed,

And many galloping emotions thrive

Rains of remorse again stabbed.

Let the moment crystallize

And the pain is drifting,

Yet a drop of love hangs on

Hope is deadly game rifting.

Death is walking ahead

Ripping the life apart,

Memories flash aghast

Sipping the life’s time alert.

Rejoicing a death so much waited

Sky is my oyster,

Kissing smiles of the Sun

Flying with the stars forever….!

Hugging the moon shine till I lost my being

And then I became wind to harbor love uncanny

Sizzling is the smoke of love,

And the Sun is igniting the passion trove.

Then I am rain………….

Raining to cut an aged open wound so filled

I am embracing you till the core and deep within

Ethereal is the lovemaking

Unearthly is the immersion

And I am crying again………….

Rains are uncontrolled torrent of tears

Love is a fire of rain and …I am burnt again.

A handful of rain………..

Living in a hopeful of death.


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      4 years ago

      I haven't had to do this yet, not until next year but I find I have to take my kids along to buy shoes. Every store size is not the same, so if I buy it solo it often doesn't fit, but that doesn't mean it's any easier. My 2 year old son does not enjoy snoppihg and will only get about 1 pair of shoes on before he refuses anymore. So they better be the ones we're planning on taking home lol

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      5 years ago from ...... a place beyond now and beyond here !!!

      Dear Deb,,,,

      Thanks for relating with my planet here...take care and have nice day ahead


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      Deb Hirt 

      5 years ago from Stillwater, OK

      Frolicking upon that plateau of life, I see your planet whizzing by, unscathed.

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      5 years ago from ...... a place beyond now and beyond here !!!

      Hey..... all my awesome friends out there......I am so glad that you all have liked this endeavors seem to be very much blessed all have made my day already....Thank you all of you for your kind words and visit here............






      Jackie Lynnley



      Dearest Faith.....

      Many blessings and smiles all you way my precious friends......have a wonderful day ahead.


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      Faith Reaper 

      5 years ago from southern USA

      Such a beautiful poem dearest deergha! Really loved this one. Where have I been to have missed this amazing piece here.


      Voted up +++ and sharing


      Faith Reaper

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      Bronwen Scott-Branagan 

      5 years ago from Victoria, Australia

      A very good poem with interesting imagery. Enjoyed it.

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      5 years ago from Branicevo

      very good my dear friend. Hope to see more like this :) . A warm hello from the Adritaic sea :)

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      Jackie Lynnley 

      5 years ago from The Beautiful South

      Such a visual flow; a favorite. Very good. ^

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      Tijani Achamlal 

      5 years ago from Morocco

      What a beautiful poem. I can picture it in my mind. So lovely! The flow the discreption are all so wonderful!.

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      5 years ago from Sky Is The Limit Adventure

      Lovely pictures...lovely words...intriguing.

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      5 years ago from United Kingdom

      Beautiful lines Deergha, thank you for sharing this with us.

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      5 years ago from Ottawa, Canada

      Very beautiful poem, Deergha! I love your choice of pictures!

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      Rahul Parashar 

      5 years ago from Delhi, India

      God, it's so subtle. That vocabulary!

    • dghbrh profile imageAUTHOR


      5 years ago from ...... a place beyond now and beyond here !!!

      Oh thank you so much and welcome.

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      Gizmo Prodigy Publishing 

      5 years ago from Shreveport, LA

      God I love this poem.


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