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Butterfly the little fairy - a short poem

Updated on April 14, 2017


Fairy so fair

Flying freely through the air

It seems as if you fail to have a care

Fairy following flowers you should be aware

Frightening fearful creatures also fly there

Unfortunately these creatures infuse fluids you cannot bear

Fatalistically I wish you a more favorable fate somewhere



The inspiration I received after enjoying PDXKaraokeGuy's poem called Hissing: An Alliteratve Poem bestowed upon me,





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      cleaner3 5 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      cool poem. I like your rhyme, and your poem, short and sweet. just like the author.

      Michael

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      flashmakeit 5 years ago from usa

      Awe shucks that was kind of you. I really appreciate your comment. Thank you so much for reading and enjoying the poem.

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      cleaner3 5 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      go to my hub if you like poetry about love and other things, you will like my poems. thanks for responding.

      I have a poem called

      Angels and fairys that you will like. Go ahead try it . I also write poetry about beautiful women just like you.!!!

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      zzron 5 years ago from Houston, TX.

      This was very nice and really imaginative.

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      flashmakeit 5 years ago from usa

      Hello Zzron thank so much for reading my poem and I am glad you liked it.

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      Tim Mitchell 5 years ago from Escondido, CA

      Nice! The Video is a treat too! I'm inspired.

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      flashmakeit 5 years ago from usa

      Thank you for stopping by Tsmog and leaving such a delightful comment.

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      Brian Loewer 5 years ago from Portland, Oregon

      This poem was stolen by a user on bige zine.com Thought you may like to know.

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      flashmakeit 5 years ago from usa

      I wrote this poem and I do not know how to copy right a poem or story thank you for letting me know but I do not know what to do.

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      Rosemary Sadler 5 years ago from Hawkes Bay - NewZealand

      Swwet poem and video.

      Don't worry about bigezine, the site is down now.

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      flashmakeit 5 years ago from usa

      Thank you Rosemary50 for the sweet comment. I am glad you enjoyed my poem and video. I think I feel inspired to write another poem.

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      Elena 5 years ago from London, UK

      Lovely to read - I like the photo/painting.

      I look forward to reading more.

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      flashmakeit 5 years ago from usa

      Thank you Lady_E!! I am going to try my best to write another poem and make an interesting picture to go with the poem.

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      Vistas 5 years ago

      Nice Poem. Deep thoughts. Imaginative and entertaining.

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      flashmakeit 5 years ago from usa

      Thank you Vistas you are my favorite person.

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      drew 5 years ago

      an enchanting poem...skilled talents, within you reside.

      ....thank you.

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      flashmakeit 5 years ago from usa

      You are very charming Drew. Thank you for reading and enjoying the short poem.

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      vespawoolf 5 years ago from Peru, South America

      A very nice poem with a beautiful painting. No wonder it's popular!

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      flashmakeit 5 years ago from usa

      It is a good day vespawoolf after reading your delightful comment!! I am glad you enjoyed the poem and my artwork. I am going to go over to your hubpage and see what you have cooking.

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      honeybee2u 5 years ago from PNG

      Short and beautiful poem. I love butterflies and that's how I found your hub. Following you.

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      flashmakeit 5 years ago from usa

      Thank you honeybee for reading and following me.

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      mizjo 5 years ago from New York City, NY

      Thank you for this beautiful post. I need some magic like this in my life.

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      flashmakeit 5 years ago from usa

      Oh thank you so much mizjo. I am so happy you have a little magic in your life now!

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      Milli 4 years ago from USA

      Lovely. short, sweet and simple. like it.

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      flashmakeit 4 years ago from usa

      Hi livingpah2004 I am so glad you came by to read my poem and I am also glad you enjoyed!

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      Jackie Lynnley 4 years ago from The Beautiful South

      So cute, and I loved the picture of the bee holding up the fairy. And the video, what a great composition!

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      flashmakeit 4 years ago from usa

      Thank you Jackie for the charming comment and I am glad you enjoyed the short fairy poem.

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      deergha 4 years ago from ...... a place beyond now and beyond here !!!

      All votes up for this wonderful poem for sure. Sharing too

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      flashmakeit 4 years ago from usa

      Wonderful dghbrh I always enjoy reading your comments and hubs. Thank you for reading, voting up and sharing.

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      Sommer Dalton 4 years ago

      Beautiful poem!! Loved this, voted up plus 2!

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      flashmakeit 4 years ago from usa

      You just made my day! Thank you so much SommerDalton for the vote up plus 2.

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      Sommer Dalton 4 years ago

      aahh!! your an awesome writer and I love you hubs and will always be your fan:)

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      flashmakeit 4 years ago from usa

      Thank you! :)

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      Gary R. Smith 4 years ago from the Head to the Heart

      Very nice poem. Thanks for responding to the Question.

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      flashmakeit 4 years ago from usa

      Thank you so much Emanate Presence. I am so glad you stopped by.

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      mizjo 4 years ago from New York City, NY

      Ah, Flash, I found your charming little poem again, and it is as magical as the first time....

      '....hie thee hence, little sprite so fair,

      I would thou hasten to flee;

      For newts and goblins come after thee,

      Tumbling with sly intent from their lair.

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      flashmakeit 4 years ago from usa

      Hi once again mizjo. You a very enchanting writer. Thanks for your support.

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      Devika Primić 4 years ago from Dubrovnik, Croatia

      A beautiful poem with such a wonderful thought of the butterfly.

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      flashmakeit 4 years ago from usa

      Oh thank you DDE this one of my favorite poems.

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      Mary Wickison 8 weeks ago from Brazil

      Poetry is very popular here on Hubpages. I love how you turn this from a carefree fairy poem into one of potential danger.

      I remember you from before, glad to see you back on Hubpages.

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      flashmakeit 7 weeks ago from usa

      Thanks, Blond Logic for reading and leaving a comment. Comments make me want to write more.

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