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By A Stream (poem)

Updated on October 9, 2012

Was warm autumn night she sat by a stream

To sing of the Joy which fashioned her day

Each beat of her heart it carried away

The bright evening stars took part in her dream

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And as she sang on to stream‘s gentle sway

Each kiss of the night reflected her gleam

As passion ignited warm hoped to this theme

Her dreams of tomorrow were free to stray

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Off in some distance cold clouds threaten blight

To cast dreams like this against bitter fate

Till moments like this will teardrops recall

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This moment is hers comes voice of the night

The tests of the day will just have to wait

For lady who sat by stream in the fall

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      Audrey Howitt 4 years ago from California

      I love your longer pieces--beautifully done!

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      whonunuwho 4 years ago from United States

      In this work, I saw a beautiful lady in the form of a stunning tree covered in brilliant colors of its leaves and swaying in a gentle breeze. The tree was giving up its beauty as it awaited the dawn of a new season, soon its shedding of the lovely coat of its leaves, and knowing that one day soon it would return to the beautiful lady of the forests, once again to be the regal dame of the wilds. Well spoken, Mhatter.

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      Deborah 4 years ago from Las Vegas

      This is stunning! I really love the video also. You did it again Mhatt!

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      Janis Leslie Evans 4 years ago from Washington, DC

      Beautiful. I love all that sensuality in the pic, the poem and the video.

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      drbj and sherry 4 years ago from south Florida

      I like your creative poetry, Mh, and I like the fascinating videos you find to accompany it. Outstanding!

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      Faith Reaper 4 years ago from southern USA

      Stellar Mh! Voted Way up once again. I have really been enjoying your choice of videos are just magnificent. God bless. In His Love, Faith Reaper

      No comments here that I have made can even compare to whonunuwho's comments, my goodness.

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      K.A.E Grove 4 years ago from Australia

      Nothing like the peace found in a perfect moment of dreaming, this was a sweet beautiful poem

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      Linda Crist 4 years ago from Central Virginia

      You get my vote for being the most romatic poet on the planet. Anothr beautiful, tender piece of art.

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      Rich 4 years ago from Kentucky

      Mh -

      I just noticed something about your poems. If you take the rhyming lines and say them together (1&4, 2&3, etc.) the poem keeps it's meaning and even flows well. Is this on purpose?

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      Graham Lee 4 years ago from Lancashire. England.

      A most whimsical and romantic poem Hatter. Lovely to read more than once.

      Graham.

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      Shining Irish Eyes 4 years ago from Upstate, New York

      Magnificent portrayal of the lady by the stream reflecting on the hard moments of the day while remembering the memories that make her heart ache but smile.

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      Thomas Silvia 4 years ago from Massachusetts

      This poem flowed just like a stream ! Well done !

      Vote up and more !!!

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      Deb Hirt 4 years ago from Stillwater, OK

      Very well done, once again.

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      Jo Alexis-Hagues 4 years ago from Bedfordshire, U.K

      Mhatter, once again you've worked your magic in this beautiful romantic poem.

      I love Whonunuwho's interpretation of it. Well done, my best to you.

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      Randi Benlulu 4 years ago from Mesa, AZ

      beautiful! I loved the rhythm and the message.

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      Ann1Az2 4 years ago from Orange, Texas

      Love the title, the imagery and the music! Voted up.

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      Ruby Jean Fuller 4 years ago from Southern Illinois

      Beautiful, Your videos go so well with everything you write. Loved it..A poet you are...

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      Martin Kloess 4 years ago from San Francisco

      Very good rcrumple!

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      Karen Silverman 4 years ago

      mmmmm...sensual...

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      Gypsy Rose Lee 4 years ago from Riga, Latvia

      Wonderfully and romantically done. Great video. Picked up what rcrumple noticed. Clever.

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      Robin Grosswirth 4 years ago from New York

      The stream gives lovely symbolism to the poem because it alludes to being reflective. I also saw hope here too even amid challenges. we all have dreams but we are tested.

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      Off in some distance cold clouds threaten blight

      To cast dreams like this against bitter fate

      Till moments like this will teardrops recall

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      Very interesting poem.

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